One star because this author doesn't flesh out anything. Jumping from one cliche to another and doing so horribly. Apparently he can fly despite his cultivation being low and the protagonist and everyone around him is 2D plus the MC is less thought out then the haughty rich boy.

Uhm. What?

strength?

I didn't wanna seem like too much of a grammar nazi, lmao.

Posted this two months ago on a novel I didn't even like and yet keep getting spammed by webnovel for this one comment.

I think it's because he's a wolf and wolves are inherently pack animals, and even before that he was in a group of people he was close to... He is as of now is a "lone wolf"...

It's written poorly. Grammar wise, character wise. No depth. Just she said it so I must feel for her. Honestly the main character is so fake it feels like I'm eating sweetener by the pound. Everything just seems cliche. The author took these cliches at their base form but instead of compounding or elaborating it's like they thought the bare-bones would be enough. It's not. It's an okay read... If you don't mind the inconsistency and boring characters... Did I mention the author likes blue eyes? Pick another color for male mcs.

distribute*

became*

I really dislike it.

meek*

Awakened*

buy*

You shouldn't add random author notes like this.

beating*

Shadows*,

Should change "in" to "into".

Should change "tell" to "say".

"It seemed he need to consume more of the potion to complete his divine sense." Is more accurate. What even did I just read.

this*