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Heh...they're whining too far, this is your fanfic and make it what you like. It's true that we can judge, but why listen to whining that ruins your work? this is great and please continue.
Thanks bro.
I really like it, the author thought carefully about the ending of each world well.
Brooo... this satisfies me. I mean, every time I read cultivation novels. MC who is already very strong somehow postpones his old problems until the next 20-50 chapters, honestly it's annoying
I'm on chapter 19. OK... so far I don't find any fanfic elements, but the story is really good. The cover is not wrong in saying this is a masterpiece that I have not found on MTL or Falo because I am more often on WN to read. Please keep up the translation, maybe someone knows the original link?
Amazing, very beautiful first arc, the writing is very easy to read. I love this, but why is this book in fanfic?
I'm on chapter 31. I rarely get emotional when reading fanfic, you know... happy, sad, and funny. Experiencing the first arc in this fanfic made me feel various emotions... until the end which was very... very... painful for my little heart. Like... why? why does the writing make... *ugh* there are no spoilers. Entering the main story, we are presented with the MC's world which is freer with its sadness. Trying to get out of the abyss of despair while looking for a way to bring him back. And I'm saving chapters, please no spoilers.
What's wrong with them? Giving a small rating to a book like this? WTF??? I'm on CH 139. So far the MC looks very OP because of the Fujitora Template from One Piece, he doesn't just sleep and eat to get these powers. The training is clear, the dedication to revenge is also the MC's big ambition to move forward to 100% mastery of the template. This story is also quite unique because MC is Blind, has Haki, a new Sage Mode and does not have the smell of naivety known as MC Beta. Hah... this is really good. Thank You.
Chapter 37. Sorry I can't continue, the story is starting to get boring because the plot is starting to repeat itself. MC Building a Village > Ninja Clan Rescue > Making a Movie > Back to Building a Village and so on. There are no fights involving the MC. I think this is suitable for those of you who want to see the MC's daily life building a village, if you don't get bored with the same plot. Just that.
Chapter 12 I was hit by NTR?. I tried to ignore other people's comments about NTR in this book, even the author said there was no NTR. But bruh... his girlfriend is in Grape and stroking someone else's cock in the hotel, even the MC knows about it. What plot is this? MC shouldn't have to get this chapter, I have a good impression with him. Man I'm disappointed