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PedagangSiput

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2020-11-25 BeigetretenIndonesia
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput4d
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    I'm on CH 72. So far I really enjoy it, the words in one chapter are very long but not at all boring. MC has an ingenious mind where none of the usual brain cell problems occur. Is MC OP? I don't think so, but it's not weak either because the MC will take action when he's pretty sure of winning. And of course this story is full of praise, the HxH Arc was completed well, I'm satisfied with how the MC training started... Well... this is highly recommended to read

    The Reincarnator's Tavern
    Filme · GnomeBob
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput17d
    Kommentiert

    What happened to this forced plot?. At first the author was quite good, but after a while I started to feel stupid by reading these forced plot holes.

    Ch 85 Chapter 85 Emergence
    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime und Comics · Tobi_444
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput18d
    Kommentiert

    In every fic I read, Danzo is always evil😅. Can someone give me a little feel for this character? I started to hate him

    Ch 84 Chapter 84 Cold Blood
    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime und Comics · Tobi_444
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput19d
    Kommentiert

    The author says it's not cliche but he killed MC's family😂. Although I agree that MC has no restraints (MC's Family) but this seems like a common thing to have them all die and it's quite common... well... cliche

    Ch 83 Chapter 83 Stabbed
    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime und Comics · Tobi_444
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput20d
    Antwortet auf Juhiko

    Hahahaha... Sorry I made a typo because the keyboard automatically filled it in

    Ch 81 Chapter 81 Self-improvement
    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime und Comics · Tobi_444
    detail
  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput20d
    Kommentiert

    3 Anbu is MC's family? Well... looks like we're going into a traitorous plot? or does the author have other thoughts? It was stupid enough to kill Hanzo in Konoha, however the third Hokage now sided with Hanzo without thinking twice.

    Ch 81 Chapter 81 Self-improvement
    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime und Comics · Tobi_444
    detail
  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Kommentiert

    Heh...they're whining too far, this is your fanfic and make it what you like. It's true that we can judge, but why listen to whining that ruins your work? this is great and please continue.

    Ch 31 [Not A Chapter] Important Announcement!!!
    Dimensional Chat Group: In Tonikaku Kawaii With Sign-In System
    Anime und Comics · SchadenFriday
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Antwortet auf Gwej

    Thanks bro.

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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Kommentiert

    I really like it, the author thought carefully about the ending of each world well.

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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Kommentiert

    Brooo... this satisfies me. I mean, every time I read cultivation novels. MC who is already very strong somehow postpones his old problems until the next 20-50 chapters, honestly it's annoying

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Verschickt

    I'm on chapter 19. OK... so far I don't find any fanfic elements, but the story is really good. The cover is not wrong in saying this is a masterpiece that I have not found on MTL or Falo because I am more often on WN to read. Please keep up the translation, maybe someone knows the original link?

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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Kommentiert

    Amazing, very beautiful first arc, the writing is very easy to read. I love this, but why is this book in fanfic?

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Verschickt

    I'm on chapter 31. I rarely get emotional when reading fanfic, you know... happy, sad, and funny. Experiencing the first arc in this fanfic made me feel various emotions... until the end which was very... very... painful for my little heart. Like... why? why does the writing make... *ugh* there are no spoilers. Entering the main story, we are presented with the MC's world which is freer with its sadness. Trying to get out of the abyss of despair while looking for a way to bring him back. And I'm saving chapters, please no spoilers.

    Got Stuck in Overlord as a NPC, Now I'm in Sothoryos?!
    Anime und Comics · Reyviel_Faesly
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput1mth
    Kommentiert

    I hate the pain in my heart, why does the author do this?. Why? Why? Why!!!?? Reply me

    Ch 17 Wed.Nes.Day
    Got Stuck in Overlord as a NPC, Now I'm in Sothoryos?!
    Anime und Comics · Reyviel_Faesly
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput3mth
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    What's wrong with them? Giving a small rating to a book like this? WTF??? I'm on CH 139. So far the MC looks very OP because of the Fujitora Template from One Piece, he doesn't just sleep and eat to get these powers. The training is clear, the dedication to revenge is also the MC's big ambition to move forward to 100% mastery of the template. This story is also quite unique because MC is Blind, has Haki, a new Sage Mode and does not have the smell of naivety known as MC Beta. Hah... this is really good. Thank You.

    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime und Comics · Hkj
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput4mth
    Verschickt

    Chapter 37. Sorry I can't continue, the story is starting to get boring because the plot is starting to repeat itself. MC Building a Village > Ninja Clan Rescue > Making a Movie > Back to Building a Village and so on. There are no fights involving the MC. I think this is suitable for those of you who want to see the MC's daily life building a village, if you don't get bored with the same plot. Just that.

    Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure
    Anime und Comics · Kaiszer
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput4mth
    Kommentiert

    This decision is quite disappointing, the author tried to tell the story as it was originally written. There are no changes whatsoever, I think the MC will become Hokage and start a new plot. But... hah.... so disappointed.

    Ch 287 Chapter 287 Reason
    Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi
    Anime und Comics · Iampoorguy
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput4mth
    Antwortet auf Yeye_Qiu

    I really like your work, thank you friend

    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
    Anime und Comics · Yeye_Qiu
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  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput4mth
    Kommentiert

    Is this another Itachi LoL

    Ch 39 Chapter 39 Sakumo's Choice
    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
    Anime und Comics · Yeye_Qiu
    detail
  • PedagangSiput
    PedagangSiput5mth
    Kommentiert

    Haven't read it for a long time, the quality of the author is getting better over time. Well... this is worth supporting.

    Ch 210 Chapter 210: Crafting His Signature Move
    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime und Comics · mythoast
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