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It is very interesting, intensive, good story! Starts very well and builds up the background of the story. I didn't read the previous story, but it is understandable without that. I somehow want to read that one too :). I am impatiently waiting for the updates! But don't be in a haste! Good food and good stories have to be enjoyed slow!
Was it Elena's work?
Would having Potential is being a monster?
Is he just collapsed, or died?
This is a very good story! I recommend to read it. I find Mia a little bit irritating, I hope her edges will smooth along the story. I am really looking forward for the next chapter!
Thank you very much for your review! For the grammar mistakes: I am sorry, but I am not a native english speaker so they are more or less unavoidable. But I try to improve and write with as few mistakes as possible. I am reading your works and I hope my mistakes will vanish in no time :). What I would like is an animation series and an app game, so I am trying really hard!
Hey! If you don't give a good home for the dog later, I curse you! Every dog - virtual, or real one - deserves a good home!
I was waiting for some recovery time with Elaine :). But this is only my point of view.