The_one_The_one

Good, but could use better write. But is very good everywhere else. Amazing wrold information and character development. Good, good, good good good good good good

I only review on stuff that I enjoy and think it is worth it. This novel is one of the few good ones on this platform. I want you to know that I love the idea and execution. I hope that you can continue writing it with your ideas and not be influenced by other too much. Any good novel needs to have struggle to make it good. So please keep writing chapters.

I am going to write a review for this one because I think the premise is great and has amazing potential. To criticize it a little I believe that it is going a little too fast, but that may be because it was to recap the background of everything. But all and all great idea, and please continue writing. (P.S you could call it "A Trap in Assassination Classroom")

I was going to get made about this,but I will be the bigger man and not.

I say yes but give her personality and not some background character

I say add her but give her personality and not some background character

More chapters please

Great start and idea of unlucky mc. But gets rid of the unlucky and the girls suddenly falling for him make no sense. Had great potential but terrible done.

Noice

Yes but Futa