A Marvelous Loop (Discontinued)

The story started well until he jumped to Fate..................................................................................................

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

Interesting concept, and it's written well. it'll be difficult to sustain such a concept in the long term without it getting tedious unless you're a good writer. so far so good. The first chapter is a bit much, the dads advice is questionable at times but it all works. Doesn't seem he'll have any relationships or friendships with him going from world to world and I don't see the end goal but this could happen later as it's still a young story. overall good.

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I really liked story at start but then first reward was hardening and my mood went down, he gets nothing after dying and fighting against stronger enemies and he fought against demigod in second quest but there also got nothing good after dying so many times..... It frustrated so much that I thought that mc's should suicide if he is not getting good power after trying so many times

what a story, have dropped after 22 chapters. First the MC was soso, i don't like him but the biggest problem is the story is all over the place. The MC is in over his head. First in mcu the chitauri invasion as a normal being, then with hardening quirk against Lancer Qu Qulaine. That direct after the fight in mcu and he killed lancer. The rewards are proportional to the danger and only a Legion ring with them he can fly. 3. Mission hold the Heaven in Percy Jackson difficult 500 loops. More loops = harder Mission and Fate was only 30or35 loops. Emergency mission in Bleach from urahara and then lovecraftian horror what is absolute not bleach conform, from a cautios character Urahara that has never used the hogyoku the absolute OP Treasure and now he will make a contract with Cthulhu a Outer God that i think can kill urahara with a look. Contract was for 6Months started after >Menos Grande fight also beginning from Bleach. Stabile updates, good writing quality a idiot MC

I’ll be honest… I don’t usually write reviews but this book was just that good In terms of character development the author made sure our wonderful mc keeps growing beautifully and his “design” was very nicely done in that it all makes sense from a logical standpoint The interactions between characters are done quite alright if not amazingly The other characters are done in such a way that they don’t feel lacking as compared to their OG counterparts The worlds’ themselves are depicted just as well and the mystery behind everything that’s happening to him is so intriguing I quite love how everything is contributing to the overall story development and I see how each loop and each world affects him The only reason I gave it a 4.8 is because I’m quite miffed that it is discontinued I would’ve given it a 4.2 but the story, the idea behind it, and the execution were done well enough that I wish there was more

If you want to read a loop fanfic actually about marvel,read marvel:the perfect run. it's better than this fake 'Marvel' loop fanfic

Story started good. Tags for Marvel and DC, so that is what I expected. He then immediately jumped to Fate and then to Bleach, neither of which I have seen, and then adds almost no world background so I have no clue what is happening. It seems author plans to stay on both anime for a while, so I unfortunately had to stop reading.

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I like the idea of novel so i am going read it

Dope! Can't wait for more! Action packed!

Ideia interessante porém a história é totalmente confusa tentando se manter com muitos buracos na trama.. ................................................................

Nice storytelling wonderful concept the characters and plot seemed so natural and expressive

I truly hope the author continues this story it's not often I find fanfiction that I truly enjoy usually they devolve into power fantasy's or wish fulfillment it shows great dedication to keep a story like this on track and keep it interesting I hope the character doesn't become too overpowered too quickly and I want to see him grow and enjoy his time in these universes

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The action is good story good The character is too aggront like some of the promblem could be easily solve Like some examples of this is he too aggront to let the heros to save him after he finished his mission

It's good. "Protagonist dumb" my brother in Christ this MC is so hypercompetent he somehow managed to kill a sorcerer while still on his first set of time loops, armed with nothing but a bunch of scavenged weapons.

I only review on stuff that I enjoy and think it is worth it. This novel is one of the few good ones on this platform. I want you to know that I love the idea and execution. I hope that you can continue writing it with your ideas and not be influenced by other too much. Any good novel needs to have struggle to make it good. So please keep writing chapters.

Excellent writing doesn't make all characters act the same or dumb they keep their original character with a bit of creativity and fun writing very well done