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Meliane_Djedjroh10dVerschicktI like the concept a lot, but I think this is poorly executed. Reading what the author has already written made me feel like he isn't really familiar with ASOIAF. There are too many inconsistencies and blunders along the way. At least, that's what I feel. Maybe it's too early to form an opinion, and things could change, but to be honest, I have quite low expectations about this story
- Meliane_Djedjroh10dKommentiert
William is Rhea's cousin through her father's younger brother, so he is a noble
Ser William just stood there confused at the whole spectacle. He sighed,"I'm glad I wasn't born a noble." - Meliane_Djedjroh10dKommentiert
besides if she had a brother, he would have been the heir and not her
"As a heiress, they may agree, but you have one fatal flaw. You have no successors, while your younger brother already was betrothed. Who knows, he might have a child when the battle for succession begins." said Daemon while grinning. - Meliane_Djedjroh10dKommentiert
Rhea doesn't have a brother, she has a sister
"As a heiress, they may agree, but you have one fatal flaw. You have no successors, while your younger brother already was betrothed. Who knows, he might have a child when the battle for succession begins." said Daemon while grinning. - Meliane_Djedjroh2mthAntwortet auf WaitWhoWhat
it always does
However, unexpected circumstances led Zane to accidentally cross over to the world of "Food Wars"! - Meliane_Djedjroh2mthKommentiertCh 19 Journey of the Stormlands (3)
- Meliane_Djedjroh3mthKommentiert
there's a thing called proof reading, you know?
Harry who heard it looked back while sirius smiled and yelled," come on pups, give your uncle a big and warm hug", Harry and Alex approached sirius and hugged him while he said," so name stole me you git yiur memories back. Do you remember the day we burnt your mother's scarf together". - Meliane_Djedjroh4mthKommentiertCh 1 First Plate
- Meliane_Djedjroh5mthAntwortet auf Shane_Town
yeah, no harem please
'This is pretty much the definition of a shotgun wedding…but I can't imagine finding a better ride or die partner than Mia, Sorry Brian you'll have to find someone else.' I thought to myself as Mia and I started making out at the kitchen table and I just managed to catch Letty standing behind a column recording us. - Meliane_Djedjroh6mthKommentiert
hey, are you OK?
Love, Cami. - Meliane_Djedjroh6mthVerschickt
- Meliane_Djedjroh7mthKommentiertCh 9 NOTICE
- Meliane_Djedjroh8mthAntwortet auf Archangel1999
yeah I know but in the first chapter they were described as identical except for the Eyes, so....
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht. - Meliane_Djedjroh8mthKommentiert
As twins, shouldn't the MC and Sirzechs look the same?P.S : the guy you chose is ugly!!
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht. - Meliane_Djedjroh9mthKommentiert
As the youngest of 8 children, I can confirm that it's the truth[img=disgusted]
Yep, I am gonna use my future knowledge for petty things. After all, I don't know if it's just the lingering thoughts on this body or what, but every older sibling has one very important job… and that is to annoy their younger sibling. - Meliane_Djedjroh9mthKommentiert
who name their child, Zephyr?
After what feels like an eternity, the sensations of agony begins to die down. A loud sigh escaped my lips as I can't help but replay the newfound memories imparted to me. "Zephyr Blake. So that's my new name. It's a bit strange having a new name, but I'll get used to it after a while", I mutter while falling back on my pillow. "Still no mother I see. So that couldn't be changed huh system", I say to no one. - Meliane_Djedjroh9mthKommentiert
you know, I generally strive to avoid Chinese style novels but this time I can't help it laughed😅😂😅😂.I haven't laughed so much in a lonnnng time
Mentally handicapped protagonist - Meliane_Djedjroh11mthKommentiert
As he aims to be king, I think it would be wise to choose herso 1
Lyanna Stark - Meliane_Djedjroh1yrAntwortet auf Link_Kokiri_Fan
- Meliane_Djedjroh1yrKommentiert
Tyrosh*
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