MettaLord
I also published a novel in wattpad
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As is tradition of Wattpad, I name thee Bigbrow, Normbrow, and Smallbrow
At least it wasn’t boar
The story is good, it's what you would expect when reading a wushu or wuxia with a side Reincarnation/Isekai mixed into it. Although I enjoy the plot, some people who aren't familiar with the wushu or wuxia genre may be turned off by the morality of the characters at times or how things can get a bit cliché. The world background is... your standard modern world with a dash of martial arts. The story could use a bit more work with how rigid dialogs can be when read but other than that, the story is pretty good if you want a quick read to pass the time, if you have read the genre before then you would know what to expect.I would rate it 8.5/10.
Very human indeed, he's only human after all~ 🤣
Wushu!
lol
That sounds cool
Wouldn't not changing his decision means he is unreasonable 😅
welcome to wushu verhygo... welcome to wushu...
What I mean is that I can't feel hurt or sorry for the characters, everything happened to quickly before I even managed to care about the characters
well that turn from 0 to a 100 real quick. But I can't feel any remorse...
I will give my true honest opinion on this. Your writing... puts a fricking Manhwa novel "Never Die Extra" to shame. Before the viewers complain'ere, I said it was the writing quality(sentences, paragraphs, grammar, etc etc). Seeing that you've recently started with 7 chapters I expect fast updates and quality chapters. The world background, doesn't really need to be explained really, is the typical world like most Cultivator stories go. The only difference I see this time is there's some focus pointed at a mystical toilet infinite Exp... god knows how many people died in there.
Wait, ling tao is Waluigi!?
can it be... a cockroach?
Famous last words for what's coming for him... I think?
So these S-Rank ghosts are... haunting this man's toilet? how many people died in that toilet for it to be a ghost nest