OVERPOWERED

entire summary of the original novel lol

and please don't ask for a 5 star review for the new chapter you can just ask for the number of reviews or their real opinion .

3.2 bcs chapter word count is short compared to the no of chapters. and bcs of that it's extremely slow pacing . I mean you just lengthen the story of 5 chap with good word count into 29 chapters with low word count. I am thankful for your work though but I need to tell you this critique.

make a big word chapter it's short here and the story is not getting anywhere in the 29 chapter it's better to few chapters with high word count than more chp with less word count. thanks for writing though I really appreciate it.

story is good. Some would not like mc characteristics but in the end it's a fanfic which is well written .

🤢 ew

doesn't work

are you good author bro? i recommend a psychiatrist she will give you meds and you can tell her all your problems if needed you can get a counselor session well i never had a crush of course Sometimes i must have felt of getting gf bcs of social treds and bcs people were getting it but later I didn't feel it was right . but whenever I get sad I listen to devotional songs and say and chant the name of shiv which helps me life is like that we will all leave the relationship here on earth and only take our deeds in the afterlife . our desire to want is always growing since childhood and might grow till death . sadness and happiness will come and go no matter who you are.

merry christmas