Hola_Bone

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Femboys pls ?

Can a country that chooses its king by a battle be called civilized regardless of his leadership traits? I would honestly say that they are more barbaric.

I don't like that they relate Bruce to Shuri. I feel like it would be better if I met the girl from Sakaar.

I like this. The Avengers are not only a group of heroes but a group of friends who sometimes play poker. ps: you could take the idea that Asgard is not a place but the town and somehow link species to Asgard and grow up under Thor as their king.

Como es que Kaguya y Yuzuru existen? No debería ser Yamai Kazamachi?

The story is becoming boring and disappointing. The protagonist became an extra or tertiary character, he has almost no dialogue and there are chapters where he doesn't say anything. He regained the spotlight on his third trip but he didn't do anything relevant and what was important happened off-screen (in addition, the spotlight went to Cana's mother, an irrelevant character who has no dialogue). Furthermore, you made him a psychopath and out of character, literally he says that if he weren't Gildarts he would kill him... how ridiculous that is, deception exists and he doesn't have to care but eliminating someone for that reason is psychopath (up to this point the He never said stupid things like that, the way he acted in front of a young Gildarts is also out of character). THE WORST was the inclusion of Irene and Selena because they exist to turn Ian into a tertiary character (since his appearance Ian is useless and stops interacting). Because of him there is no longer a chapter where Ian interacts with Natsu, Grey, the Strauss family and Cana. Ian did not have a single dialogue with Mystogan or Wendy and later we are told that Wendy was living with him. What a waste. When you take Irene and Selene off the screen, Ian regains the protagonist and you stop turning interesting characters into jokes (all of Makarov's dialogues are him crying and frustrated, the same with Wakaba and the other one) the story will improve. And for the love of God, take advantage of the system and reduce the fairy tail adventures that are very short and monotonous, we don't know what happened to Erza's friends and the whole issue with that weapon. Furthermore, the story forgets that it is a harem and ignores a romantic interest for more than 50 chaoters (Ur, Gray's teacher). (Traductor)

The story is becoming boring and disappointing. The protagonist became an extra or tertiary character, he has almost no dialogue and there are chapters where he doesn't say anything. He regained the spotlight on his third trip but he didn't do anything relevant and what was important happened off-screen (in addition, the spotlight went to Cana's mother, an irrelevant character who has no dialogue). Furthermore, you made him a psychopath and out of character, literally he says that if he weren't Gildarts he would kill him... how ridiculous that is, deception exists and he doesn't have to care but eliminating someone for that reason is psychopath (up to this point the He never said stupid things like that, the way he acted in front of a young Gildarts is also out of character). THE WORST was the inclusion of Irene and Selena because they exist to turn Ian into a tertiary character (since his appearance Ian is useless and stops interacting). Because of him there is no longer a chapter where Ian interacts with Natsu, Grey, the Strauss family and Cana. Ian did not have a single dialogue with Mystogan or Wendy and later we are told that Wendy was living with him. What a waste. When you take Irene and Selene off the screen, Ian regains the spotlight and you stop turning interesting characters into jokes (all of Makarov's dialogues are him crying and frustrated, the same with Wakaba and the other one) the story will improve. And for the love of God, take advantage of the system and reduce the fairy tail adventures that are very short and monotonous, we don't know what happened to Erza's friends and the whole issue with that weapon. (Traductor)