hmmm .... what i can say is......mediocre just so so..........not 1 of the best but nice try...... just want to ask .... why parent are always dead in some novel???? Did u guys hate ur parent that much

wut he say .. wut he say... he say his name is haile supreme !!...so my name is Chaotic Saint

not bad... that all i can say...until mc/fmc go to luminous world .. no matter how strong they are... in tensura verse they are just ant.. cause weak is sin.

hm....i have a great expectations for u like his parent(mc) for him......but i know he's genius but u just IQ around middle school so i dont care much.....cause just copy paste still get nothing .....we call this types of person idiot beyond idiot, stupid beyond the boundary of stupidity.

too much nonsense.....enemy comes like thunder.......i adviced the author read other book make reference ....poor author he must have disease in head

hm....this story ....too slow.. 3/5 from 1 to latest chapter

lol....he want someone to killed him but ...he became more strong.....how can someone killed ..or its that possible

well..too many word that i dont care just skip and reading important part

welp...thats so weird ...his age is10.043 welll.

stupid thats all......

pls...dont make too many lemon part that require 2 chapter ....that waste of my time u know....i dont when i will die so make it ASAP so i can know wut happen next

well ....why lemon chapter..haduh i want to know his new status not lemon....but what can i say that author option

welll.....he so weak even ant can kill him

well..when this ff will update ....if too long .im too lazy too wait.

this is getting weird ..why not added ghoul too...maybe sume dungeon ....monarch ruler ...why not

well....just ok ....not to bad i think ..even though some chp i skip...just form the start i dont like part where he talk with his other ...to many talk wasted a lot of time

he will get xia wu right....why get another?? i dont think it quite ok for tang san have harem but not the mc...usually the mc of the story get harem...

well...mc has brain young master problem...but his sister personality i dont think i liked it...she already kill someone but she did not know

why make her in love with tang san???

what pen can do beside writing....change ur fate or etc??