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"Wisdom has been chasing you, but somehow you are faster." -
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PeterGriffith1dVerschicktThis is just sad, the first chapter had me, but 2nd to 8th lost me. The author is unresponsive to anything or anyone I honestly dont blame ya for it, you should have also added in the synopsis that it's a tag along with Rimuru. and honestly for someone so powerful it could have been a stand alone for his own adventure but you do you, Just disappointed that it turned out like that.Writing: 4 starStory dev: 2 star just a rehash of the Original with a strap on of OC.Characters: 5 star it's artoria what else can I say.Update: 4 starWB: 3 star
- PeterGriffith1dAntwortet auf tyronxxz
why are you always mentioning spiderman this and that? is he that integral in the story?
Unreal Speed: Although Nemesis seems like a heavy and slow being, he can run as fast as cars, maybe even faster. (Evolvable)] - PeterGriffith26dKommentiertCh 46 Battle of New York Part 1(Edited)
- PeterGriffith1mthAntwortet auf EndOneXDIn this world where gods gave blessings to mortals on a whim, it was a wonder why they didn't deal with it. Actually, it wasn't wonder at all. Gods seek one thing, and one thing only, Entertainment.
- PeterGriffith1mthAntwortet auf Martian_Fridge
yeah, just showing a paragraph or two of him training himself or just about to finish. Instead of a sentence of "oh yeah I put bricks in my shadow" ain't that just lackluster? just a paragraph or two would suffice so readers wont get bored of reading him training. I kinda forget sometimes that WebN doesn't really have writing like AO3 or RR so I forget to lower my standards.
...That was around 25-30 pounds worth of Bento. I estimated according to the weight I felt.detailJujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In NarutoAnime und Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes - PeterGriffith1mthKommentiert
0 feats, 7 kamikaze attempts
My gaze turns serious as I tilt my head to look at him. "We are going to lay some ground rules. The first thing is that attitude needs to go. Second, we are going to talk about your tenth Shikigami. If you can utilize your cursed technique, you'll become a walking calamity. However, if you don't do anything, all you will ever be is potential man." - PeterGriffith1mthAntwortet auf NimtheWriter
- PeterGriffith1mthAntwortet auf unit_201
so... when's the next chapter?
Though my top speed is faster than anything man-made, I'm not faster than light. Meaning that the instant I open this door the guy will be flooded with sunlight, yet the moment I try to leave and find another exit the half-liquid blob can just open the door I'm forcing closed.detailI am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)Anime und Comics · unit_201 - PeterGriffith1mthKommentiert
nope, I've seen it done 6th time I think? maybe more.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is the only FGO fic that has ever destroyed a Grail.detailI am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)Anime und Comics · unit_201 - PeterGriffith1mthAntwortet auf unit_201
Then why did he choose her of all the other characters he could have chosen? that's kinda dumb to begin with ain't it?
Though my top speed is faster than anything man-made, I'm not faster than light. Meaning that the instant I open this door the guy will be flooded with sunlight, yet the moment I try to leave and find another exit the half-liquid blob can just open the door I'm forcing closed.detailI am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)Anime und Comics · unit_201 - PeterGriffith1mthAntwortet auf Outer_God_AzathothCh 4 When People Breaks.detailI am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)Anime und Comics · unit_201
- PeterGriffith1mthKommentiertCh 5 The Mothership
- PeterGriffith1mthKommentiertCh 1 First Encounter with Bandits
- PeterGriffith2mthAntwortet auf Yagaht
yeah, it's used a lot in AO3
It's one of the disadvantage of writing in 1st POV. - PeterGriffith2mthKommentiert
too convoluted, you need to simplify.
"If it can grant any one wish, why don't you just wish from him to save your world. But I don't think that you are that stupid that you didn't try or think of that, are there limitations on that cup of reincarnation or something like that you just can't intervene in that world that much?" Madara quickly deduced the situation, but he wasn't finished just yet as he continued, "Or these supposed threats known as Monarchs which destroy or bring destruction to that world of yours, even if you take that cup of reincarnation power to bring any one of your wishes true, that which can only take care of any one single Monarch, which left other Monarchs which you will fight and fight over and over again while this world continues to being destroyed and you will not have that cup power to turn back time to your supposed advantage." - PeterGriffith2mthAntwortet auf Hkj
- PeterGriffith2mthKommentiert
the student council pres and vice, It'd be interesting to see more interaction with em.
Other then that I am interested to know what are your favorite characters in cote? What are you favorite characters in this novel so far and which characters would you like to see Eru interact with more? - PeterGriffith2mthAntwortet auf 3PoundsOfRiceCh 10 Infamous