Simply a good history, with a very good translator behind it. all I can say it's good work brother! stay strong, and please don't drop! I know you can do it!

grammar it's bad, have absolutely zero character development, and the plot it's super rushed. I don't particularly have anything against the author, but clearly this was not his best history.

firstly, thanks to the author for the history. is Very difficult to find a good persona fanfic that actually care about the development of characters, and has a very good MC. and this history gives me exactly that. good characters, good development of the plot, and the grand twist, the MC. who's basically a SI/OC. he clearly knows his shit, but not too much. in general? this is some good shit. and I recommend you who are reading this to give a chance, since the chances you have to find something even remotely close to this book is small.

great book, the updates are stable. the writing quality it's not bad, but it's not super good either. but the narrative it self keeps you hooked to know what's going to happen next. ( OBS: I know that the betrayal from Hermione looks forced and all, but it was a good twist,and I am still waiting for the MC get his revenge on her. if anyone knows some Fanfiction with betrayal/revenge with some key characters and the MC please tell me about... I love see the good and old vengeance being served. )

ok.... but if you aren't sure of something, you just don't talk about something you don't know. I believe this is common sense. so please, go back to your tik tok's and leave the poor author alone.

nice....

you.... have a point in there, not gonna lie.

man, you don't know how much I want to forget his stories, but I don't know why, I always remember them.... maybe I'm a monster.

raw?

me too my friends... me too

good... very good... please continue.

haven't read yet, because I'm still playing, and don't want any spoiler. but please, don't drop! this is the first time I have seen someone do a fic about ff 16, and because of this I'm very, very happy!

well... now the things are finally getting interesting.... I sincerely hope that the author give him some Juicy power ups, but not too overpowered... after all, this is still marvel... and if the mc wants to survive, more power is necessary.

ok man, a wish you and your dad stay safe and sound! thanks for the chapter!

This is great history, with good plot and excellent Mc... And the other thing is the how the Mc can go for the heaven to the hell in one second! and vice versa, things go wrong and not everything go like the plane... I am sure that history is a treasure!

Cara, eu tentei ligar a parte em que o próprio MC cuida do seu corpo antes da regeneração com o fato de que ele tem um conhecimento básico/avançado em enfermaria.... mas eu não expliquei muito bem, mil perdões pelo erro, vou tentar explicar as coisas um pouco melhor nos próximos capítulos.

Oi povo! Shadow na linha, então, essa é uma história amadora sem editor ou revisor, portanto não é perfeita, e pode sair com muitos erros de ortografia e gramática.... mas eu vou tentar melhorar a escrita e a história em geral a cada capítulo! Então se vocês quiserem comentar alguma coisa que eu possa melhorar, eu ficaria grato! Obrigado de novo a todos que leram e possivelmente continuaram lendo!