Valtura
Full time worker and novice writer.
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Not many will see this, but I will not post any chapters for the time being. Being spammed with negative reviews by fresh accounts that hasn’t even read the story is taking its toll on me. Me being accused of making fake accounts just to insult people is upsetting me when I feel it should be easy for the sight to just pull up my IP address to prove otherwise. Im not satisfied with the lack of response from this site so I will not post until this is figured out. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Sure and I used an alternate account for the rest of my reviews and comments too, that makes a lot of sense. And I only used that account to only respond to your review and no one elses? Yupp makes a whole lot of sense. That response sounds just like your review, groundless. Which is why I don’t bother trying to disprove you. I’ve already had proper conversations with reasonable people about it in the comments already.
Thank you! And yes this is my first. I wasn’t confident in myself at all in the beginning and I constantly felt that I needed to rush some parts so I wouldn’t disinterest people too soon. But everyone’s comments helps a lot and I constantly aim to improve.
Sadly he can’t. Blood pact has to have the person/creature to be bonded with him or it wouldn’t work. but I have something planned for her. It’ll be kinda dark, but I’m slowly building up to it so you might can already tell what will happen.
If he didn’t already accept that he was dead before then he would’ve been mad. But I think having near life death experiences can really change you
I agree. She’s just becoming too impatient and that will only lead to recklessness
This is good to know. I try to please both sides, people who like seeing the stats and people who don’t, so I’m trying to find a balance. But until I hear a different opinion, I’ll slowly start going back to how I did it before. Thanks for the input!
He doesn’t think he’s above them, he just doesn’t believe he’s the same as them. I think I even mentioned that he even respected Mark bc of marks determination to grow stronger. But I agree with you, his personality is weak. His mindset is changing, but he can’t throw away who he is in a day. All he can do is to not let peopel push him too far which I’ve been making sure hasn’t happened yet. In the end he always puts his foot down. At least that’s what I’ve been trying to get across.
I’m glad you think so! Writing this story is more important than the money involved. It’s my first story original story so I want it to be good.
It’s a stereotype for good reason. Almost anything you read or watch has a stereotype or two
I understand, if she could hold her own then she would make a more enjoyable character to read about. What I’ve been wanting people to understand about her is that no matter what Noah did or what he’s become, her feelings for him never changed. and that effects Noah a lot since he’s never had that before. But it doesn’t mean he loves her. I’ve hinted a couple of times, but he does have doubts about her. The fact that you find her annoying means I’ve atleast done a good job giving her character😅. It’s all to lead up for her change though and her reason for her change so hopefully it’s worth it.