BlueMoon_IceCat
I love to eat noodles, that's it
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[Review from a reader at Chapter 10] There are a few things that i don't really like in the story so far. 1. The Chapter 1 of this story is uncomfortably similar to the first chapter of RSSG. The structure and the sequence. 2. So far (Chapter 10), the characters are 2D. I mean they sound so bland 3. The flow of the story is like a paper filled with holes. The thought process is always broken and made the story painfully bland to me. So far, that's the things i noticed in the story. Despite all of this, i will continue reading this hoping that the author will improve. I'll make another review once i reach Chapter 50. Sorry for this review, Author 😞
Because I'm also a Uke
Heaven ;)
Who knows? Even the Author himself don't know hahaha. I'll just let the story flow itself
I am hahaha
Well, I still got a lot of World Quest to do because I'm lazy to do them
Thank you. Muah <3
Call FBI, hurry! Hahaha
It really is gay hahaha
Go ahead, my dear. I'll be the witness Muah 3