to change which words and why?

of course Nyx will encourage his most deep and sinful desires since she's a demon. Also, she didn't change her attitude out of nowhere, she had 3 years of time skip living with him, inside him, feeling the same as him and understanding his past life. She still has a shy side, but when things get serious, she acts serious. and Aria, well, she has dozens of years of life and a past that has formed her personality until now. manipulative? a little. controlling? a little. over protective? very. If these points bother you, bad news, they won't change to please you

I would love to write a mass release more than any reader read it for real. But it's easier to say than actually do... I need to get more motivation to write fast to save it, so thx for the positive feedback

most of the readers who complain want the characters to be made of perfections while I believe they are more defined by imperfections. But at the end of the day, I'm a poor guy, so all I care about is that the novel has readers willing to unlock the chapters with coins so I don't starve without any money xD

the captain obvious is literally the perfect reader for any writer on WB, you can see that based on how any writer reacts to his comments. He always has something nice to say even when it's negative criticism about things that could be improved. he is polite and funny. you, on the other hand... I'm poor, but I would give the little money I have to never see a comment from you on my novel again because you are annoying af

Don't blame me for your mind problems. and if you find the novel gross, wtf are you doing still here?

Latin. and has meaning

yep, you can leave now. and you don't need to judge bad something that doesn't hurt anyone, that's just toxic

Am I saying it or is some character saying it? when a reader doesn't know the difference between the author's opinion and that of a character about other fictional characters... yeah, it's called "dumb," but I tried using "bad reader" not to offend too much

kill someone they don't know and don't know if it's their enemy? I was making MC go down a path like that, but it seems pretty irrational and not interesting to be honest, glad my good readers don't think like you so they gave me a good feedback about it in the most recent chapters

Why would they hide from their family in their own kingdom where everyone could recognize them? that's a NO, man

Also, your other replies were censored by WN and I don't know what they were about. well, you look like someone who can't even reply anything decently to defend toxic people who only complain. Do you understand how not having someone like that as a reader is so much better for me? Why can't I want to have good readers and avoid the bad ones?

Criticism has to make sense, otherwise it's just a meaningless complaint. This guy and others complain about how the characters are, and this one is still quite ambiguous, in these cases, the problem is not my bad English or my way of explaining things, they simply don't like the content, so why continue reading? If you read all the comments, you'll see how I welcome constructive criticism (which is usually about something bad)

good question, you may find out if you keep reading

actually it's the old girl and she's been mentioned before. thanks for reading!

good points

I could explain to you about reincarnation and how he was created as a new person, etc... but you're not worth my time. pls, just drop, if this novel is not for you, don't read, it's simple, right? Can you understand this simple thing?

When you are 14 or younger, most girls of the same age cannot compete with girls of 16/18, this is a fact based on the average, but of course, there are always exceptions

I will write it again, I just need time to settle things up