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nice work 🥰😚

You crazy 🤣

This guy 😂

That was unexpected.

That's some Bridgerton stuff right there.

DaMMMM! 😬

Really interesting chapter, aside from the miscommunication, I don't see any errors. Straight to the point and no stalling in their conversations either. It's a good start author well done.

Am sad for the granddaughter

That's one way to go.

Am glad to hear that. looking forward to the next chapter

I wasn't talking about the weapons. I meant the story itself, i believe this can be a masterpiece you only need to work on the details and making it realistic. It's science fiction i get it, but with more work it can be an amazing novel.

Romeo Deadman hhhhmmmm🤔

I love the action, and the mental image you're creating is even more amazing. However there's very little description, and the characters are not relatable, the events are also exaggerated within a short pace. Although this book is interesting, it's not as intriguing as it could be, it still needs a lot of work. But i have full faith in the watcher, can't wait for an update.

too fast am confused

All that chaos just to pass a message

sometimes i wonder how sol is more human than machine

Xavier is just crazy. This chapter is great, i admire how you're able to weave action and dialogue

I've caught the pace, and it's getting more interesting by the minute. It's fun how you're able to match humor in, you're doing a great job watcher.

it's getting more interesting