Not good, but could be improved... Some dialogues are missing quotation marks, which makes it hard to know whether a character is talking... . Regarding the story... Just another MC following the protagonist like a lost pet.. He's supposed to be OP but he isn't applying his gifts properly... Also he isn't using his metaknowledge properly, he acts as if he's an OC that doesnt know arifureta..

No OCs

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Make it so the Justice League was formed just to know who's the one behind the shenanigans he did like in Mother's day...

Create a Justice League but he isn't a part of it.. It would be interesting to see how the Justice League could be formed without Batman's involvement. Like zero involvement with the league and no personal/work relationship with any member of the league.

For real... Using Kph would actually be much better... Mach is just not the right unit for speed stats..

You shouldn't be using mach as a unit for his speed stats... I think even the fastest jets have'nt reached mach10 yet... ... Kph is much better and realistic...

For real... He is supposed to be poor kid... And then he proceeded to provoke someone in a gang.. someone that knows his identity and where he lives.. It is legit stupid...

Cant he use D4C, to escape and live peacefully... Or another stand to change the results???

Why is that Robbin Parkers still alive then??? Someone with Dormammu's Powers!!!! Ancient One should have dealt with him already right? Because that is exactly one of her purposes??? Please give me a good reason....

Looking forward for more... Just please dont tell and give anyone anything at all... I've read a similar fic before where the mc told his family and its just really so bad and awkward and makes the characters so one-dimensional...

Pls dont give anyone anything at all...

Would have been more satisfying if he actually bashed Higuma, rather than follow the plot... With his cyrrent strength, it should have been easier... Felt like he got weaker for no reason.. Especially since he finally got someone to protect....

Lock.. Inventory is always a must...

Black bulls

GOLD!!!!! This is so good!!!

While Byakuya's Senbonzakura is really cool... But how would mihawk and flashy flash should affect his zanpakutou...

Marco

I think that anti-reality resistance he got is specifically just defense against reality warpers... I am just really confuse about the conceptual defense because it seems to broad.. Or maybe conceptual defense just works solely against attacks imbued with concepts..

Doesn't have to be more specific when it comes to fate? Like an Anti-fate skill or Fateless skill?