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Flameclaw is the original author, he's on fanfiction.net
He can still bleed, it’s just that it won’t show
When you don't post proof of the author giving you permission, it's usually meaning that they're stealing since they could have easily just posted the proof and not get any hate for it. Besides, this is Webnovel. It's super easy to take anyone's work and post it as your own with just a few clicks, they don't care here.
Yeah, Mc's cringe like that
I'll begin by saying that I enjoyed this fic, a lot. It's good. Sadly, I think the author is burnt out or just doesn't even know how to continue to progress his story. The beginning of this story is amazing, solid development of characters and world building. Even the MHA arc was good, if a little scattered because of the no planning when the author went there. Now, why am I dropping this? Well, it's easy to say. After that interview where the MC talked about the world and revealed stuff, this whole story has been going downhill. The MC now feels like a Mary Sue, the characters feel bland and you never get to see the characters in their Natural habitats. Worse, the author is going with this, "My MC is not a pervert, he's a gentleman but he'll watch as a girl cum herself on his blood." Yeah, the author began focusing too much on making the MC perfect and projecting to make the story feel like going anywhere. I really hope that this review will do anything to help the author because I really want to go back and enjoy this story. It's so well written, even if the grammar leaves things to be desired.
What makes you ask that question?
It’s the same thing, just different words
Sadly, the Yun doesn't know that so he's just going with what he thinks works. It's an unreliable narrator type of situation.
He’s a child, they saw stuff like this all the time.
Nah, it's still there