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Yoh Edogawa is oc
Yeah but in later chapters.
This MC keeps disappointing me with his actions and lack of self control. You putting all these girls around him just so he can have a harem in the future is generic and overused. I couldn’t finish reading the chapter after I seen “She had almost fallen into depression when Bruce could no longer bear to see this and finally revealed to her the existence of the NerveGear” this mc is being controlled by his emotions when he should be the one in control.
Giving an unknown solider like slade wilson couple millions for training doesn’t make sense and would raise too many questions. Like how would a kid know the skills of an unknown solider that he had never meet before? Slade didn’t get famous until he started being a mercenary but before that he was unknown. The most the MC should give slade is 100k and that’s being generous there is absolutely no reason why the MC should be giving out millions to someone that has no reputation like the current slade it would raise too many questions. Just because the MC is rich don’t start making dumb decisions, think about the consequences.
I have couple recommendations for powers that’s from assassins you can give the MC. Hei the Black Reaper (Darker than Black): has the ability to manipulate molecular structure at will, frequently manifested as the electrical bursts that he uses to kill all of his enemies. However, the full extent of this power lets him manipulate matter, short out entire buildings, and, in one instance, destroy a huge portion of South America. Risotto Nero (JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Golden Wind): with his lethal stand Metallica he is able to manipulate iron and magnetism at will, Risotto is able to craft weapons from midair or, better yet, inside the bloodstreams of his own opponents and even turn himself invisible. Murasame (akame ga kill): has a deathly poison that can kill any opponent within seconds, an enviable weapon for any killer. Hit (dragon ball): the legendary assassin of universe 6. Gennosuke (Basilisk): Gennosuke has the ability to use his eyes to reverse the homicidal intent of anyone nearby, in other words: If somebody expresses hostility towards Gennosuke, he can will his enemies to kill themselves instead of him. Also, unlike his uncle's Dōjutsu, Gennosuke's can turn his on or off at will and does not require direct eye contact to use against opponents as shown when Gennosuke was able to use it on Iga ninja who were behind him and out of his line of sight when they attacked him after Oboro committed suicide. Oboro (Basilisk): Mystic Eyes: Oboro was born with "Mystic Eyes" which neutralize the techniques and skills of any ninja that meets her gaze directly, halting whatever technique/skill they are using at the moment (even passive skills), seems to operate on demons as well. Thane Krios (mass effect): Thane is a Drell assassin, rumored to be the most skilled in the galaxy. Durzo Blint (Night Angel): Durzo is magically enhanced assassin and potentially the greatest swordsman to walk the world of Midcryu. He is the wielder of the black Ka’kari, a sentient magical artifact of extraordinary power, which gives him abilities including invisibility, functional immortality (no aging), quickened healing, absorption of magic, perfect vision in any condition, and resurrection (at a cost). His long lifespan has enabled him to become master of weapons, smithing, herbology, poisons, and his magical Talent.
Imagine if kagutasuchi also had the fire spirit from shaman king and the fire devil fruit from one piece it would boost his fire powers to his the next league. The uzumaki clan should develop special gloves like the ones Roy Mustang uses in full metal alchemist so that even civilian uzumaki clansmen can be useful in battles.