Not going to lie I really hope it doesn't turn to the phantom thieves just basically becoming their subordinates.

Not going to lie I really like how u presented the mc as having great coincidences but also being intelligent as shown through his scores and actions.

Oh, okay, that makes a lot of sense and honestly fair enough. Considering the time frame, it makes sense for him to have such a view.

Could we get a picture of the mc.

Would love to see Caroline and justine reaction to elizabeth trying to use Joker. I don't think they would like that even if she has no malicious intent.

Honestly love how everyone is trying to use ren but in the end they are all part of his play and hopefully he will transcend from the actor to the director cause honestly I cant think of any other evolution that could make sense or heck stupid thought maybe he becomes the next philemon like how rimuru became the next veldanava.

What about shizue will she be part of the harem.

Honestly manipulation gets a bad wrap but people forget that it can be used for good and in a helpful way. People use manipulation everyday usually unknowingly so honestly I think this is perfectly fine.

I genuinely think that this ren will be come stronger then them it would be interesting to see ren final persona form becoming not the actor but the director showing how he was once not in control but now is.

been a long time since I read tower of God but who is urek a simp for.

what is the update schedule on this fanfic?

It's not saying that the love love fruit wasn't eaten by Hancock when forced to by a celestial dragon he is saying that he wants to see if they bought the fruit from the same auction cause it wasn't said that the celestial dragon had th3 fruit before buying Hancock unless it had said so and if so pls do tell me the chapter.

thats fine as long as its still clear that its the mc harem unlike other fanfics which turns it into the girls harem.

Also I think it helps that it's in jack pov not the crews if it was the whole crew pov then I would completely agree with u.

There are changes amongst these chapters it's subtle as multiple times the mc comments on it how people are stronger then in canon or luffy didn't seem to handle it [the kuro fight] these chapters also help develop the mc relationship with some of the characters well at least with zoro luffy and nami also the fanfic is moving extremely quickly into alabasta spending about an arc a chapter overall I think it's fine if u don't like it then fair enough.

Could we get a picture of what the mc looks like.

the author said it will follow canon until alabasta and it seems the mc is strong enough but is wanting to make the journey smooth by sticking to canon for now.

I do enjoy the mc well respecting luffy authority deferring to him.

The mc is lazy and wants to keep canon until alabasta [which is the arc that the author said canon will change] I really don't think yhe author is trying to make the mc tough.

I'm pretty sure he is still captured.