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Thank you very much for the opinion, something to keep in mind sincerely, as for the story, the mc continues to evolve after the first one, as a spirit must continue to grow. On the other hand the little magnolia fairy will have the name Liliti.
The mc suffers from a disorder of emotions which is due to his regression and his inexperience is more because his body is still developing and he is not used to it. Not to mention that he has never felt a wide range of emotions. Still thank you very much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.
It would be too easy and would ruin something important later on, I'm sorry about that.
Ho sorry, the idea was to explain it a little later as the story progresses, so that the protagonist and the reader discover the event at the same time, since he doesn't know how the jump happened either. Thanks for your comment and for reading
It is a multiverse jump to a well-known multiverse, exactly injustice year 4.
I know it seems so, the problem is that this is only the prologue, that's why I didn't give it much depth since it's something that will be quickly forgotten, even so thanks for the comment, I'll take it into account and in a few days it will be rewritten with some more background, thanks for commenting and reading.
I'm sorry it's still a little difficult for me to write in English, I'll try to fix it, thank you very much for commenting and reading.
sorry for the first thing, English is not my native language and I make some mistakes, I will try to fix it, about the other is because the memories of that body belonged to a young man who was bullied, which were only memories of his parents, back from school and spend locked in his room day by day, denying the existence of their around, although not explained in detail by the facts that occur at the end of the prologue, which still do not finish publishing, thanks for your comment and thank you very much for reading the novel, I hope you like it and if you did not, I'm sorry.