HadesChampion

ngl kinda meh choice for partner, I guess I just lack enough knowledge of her as a character , been spread out I only remember her name and job

so it's pretty much all about "face" , it's just overdone in books where further education makes no sense, like in cultivation novels , the school is only useful as a supply station

ashara Dayne

what's with the chinese author obsession of going to further education in a world here it isn't needed such as battle and survival books, they go to university and attend like 1 class and then they either over level their peers before the first week or get into trouble and have to leave . such a terrible plot filler

a new arc idea could be star wars

not bad but the in detail battles are very dull to me and probably others who arnt star wars nerd. my only advice is to not get too down in the details of the battles and logistics, broad strokes or summarise, but I'm not a writer so I'm no expert just a fan

wouldn't new order be better

more interested in kunous story than the main one atm

find out next time on dragon ball z