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joe_caa

joe_caa

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very weird and introvert that likes girls

2019-10-25 BeigetretenPhilippines
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  • joe_caa
    joe_caa4 months ago
    Verschickt

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  • joe_caa
    joe_caa4 months ago
    Antwortet auf Abadom

    That's the dumbest excuse I've ever heard. Make a better story or better yet give up on wrting cause you are garbage

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa4 months ago
    Verschickt

    It feels like this was written by A.I.............. ................................................ .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... .................................... ....................................

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa4 months ago
    Verschickt

    Im not impressed at the MC's supposed cunning and the tricking the trickster goddess part was super lame writing.................. ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ............... ...............

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa4 months ago
    Verschickt

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  • joe_caa
    joe_caa4 months ago
    Verschickt

    Overall mediocre story. It has ALL the hallmarks of a badly written piece of literature............................................. ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................ ............................................

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa5 months ago
    Verschickt

    Mediocre story, even for a fanfic.................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... .................... ...................

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa5 months ago
    Kommentiert

    Eh quite mediocre writing tbh

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa5 months ago
    Kommentiert

    Eh, writing could be better

  • joe_caa
    joe_caa5 months ago
    Verschickt

    Grammatical mistakes are all over the place. The writing is really bad, its shallow, repetitive, inconsistent, lots of plotholes and shizzz, all the mistakes that beginner author's make..................................................................................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................