Allan black smith
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Amazing fantasy book! The character are made so well. And I love them all. Plus I can already see the character development coming and I know it's gonna be good. Need more updates!
I like it. The beginning was hilarious. It actually kept me on my toes. It's almost like an action movie. It's incredible. Keep up the good work.
Writing quality - 5 stars Updating stability - 5 stars Story development - 5 stars Character design - 5 stars World background - 5 stars I'm recommending this book to fantasy lovers. The book is really good.
This book kept me spell bound, and I was compelled to keep reading. Each scene flowed smoothly from one to the next. It's a very good novel, probably the best at webnovel If you are to hesitate to read it or not, i can assure everybody, you won't regret it.
Loved it! Amazing work from amazing author! ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The Good: A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part. Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows! The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense. The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)
Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find many mistakes while reading it. Theres a room for improvement though with the quality. I understand the author is Asian and not very good in English nonetheless. Good work.
Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.
excellent opening
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