Not all scars show, Not all wounds heal, Sometimes you can't see the pain someone feels -Anonymous
2019-08-01 BeigetretenSouth Korea
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Nice story, though you are in a (very) serious need for an Editor.
I liked the names. But right now the novel feels to much like other fiction-fantasy novels...I am looking forward to the other chapters.
Keep it up and Keep it going!!