Hello, Thank you very much for your words of encouragement and review.

I like the way the story captured attention from start till end. The suspense is drew guesses.... I must mention that cover was captivating

This is a promising Story. Like in the System interface, it has the ability to touch on people's acceptability.

We use money or other form of currency here on earth, what do we use at the other side? If we have to prepare for it how do we accumulate enough wealth to live well there? Now it comes to gaining point to be converted to wealth; like creating certain opportunity or something that others could use whether they like it or not, and turning in profits for the creator. etc. I'm probably thinking too much into the story. It's an inspiration if you get what I'm thinking.