UndeadProgenitor

Honestly I feel that it’s too fast paced, and you’re not fully fleshing out the characters. It feels as though you’re simplifying and summarizing the characters.

Ic someone watched American gods

lol

They still died but anything made sense. Nothing to drop over.

How so?

Honestly the reason I don’t read much ff anymore. They made me start reading real books again

Welcome back

I had to read this again because I had no idea what you’re talking about. Had you taken the time to properly read my review you’d see the things I pointed out are no longer there. One thing I do remember was the grammar and the main character being seven years old…that changed to nine years old. But yeah, thanks for taking your time to answer me though.

Ngl, I loved all of them. I can’t really tell you my favorite when it comes to those.