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I like alot of things to anime to fencing and lot of other things I love enjoying food and enjoy making it I don't have any particular talent yet I'm confident but I'm the worst when holding money
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no I think it would make sense because in there world an ancestor vampire of a family represents that family's strongest member and eldest leader, so if you think it like that then a house or family with a patriarch or matriarch dying would mean that family would either be assimilated or be wiped out cuase there's no other elder vampire in there house or family or clan... I wish I explain it well.
that's true, and false in the same time, you can consider it conciliation prize AZ best.
true that.
well... She's both a cowered and hoe... his lucky he didn't get hitched with her.
you could have just called it a laboratory rather than office, I've been into labs before and most of their equipment is machinery, large once in fact, but well it depends on which, type of laboratory your referring to in thus one.
hmm... this is to big a paragraph, you should change it in the next iteration of this story, if you want your next story published professionally.
I'll be ruthless, in pointing out the faults, of your writing in a paragraph by paragraph bases, this would help you clean our your old works and help me learn writing my self I wish for the best.
well Damn... fuck! his gonna make a monster.
the hacker.
no... maybe the MC is the sheffared remember his a goat herder😐😆
no how about a seer?
huh... so she's a lot more epic then.
yup the noob gear is actually a veterans favorite, far trope is here.
Damn this... why is a sci-fi building Pugalist? And not mechanics that builds giant iron man suits.
good to know I've missed that part.
yup makes sense.
damn plus one in party.
huh... yup my friends the players had just met the inventor of the game.