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kekekke1yrKommentiertCh 23 The Great Human War- kekekke2yrVerschickt
Beta MC Alert. MC is portrayed as a top of the top in business world but has no clue about woman. Also, idk why he is being such a pussy, just do it you cuck. Plus MC is such a pushover that keeps on getting slapped but still gave them golds and gifts for nothing but bulshit. Overall, interesting story with beta mc that really does not deserve on what he had gotten at all. Not surprised if someday his wife cheats on him but he'll keep on forgiving her.
- kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 10 Outdated Knowledge
- kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 8 A Genius In The Making?
- kekekke2yrVerschickt
Character is nonexistant, mc is weak. Nothing to talk about here. Author keep trying to make mc perfect but that's so cringe. mc has no personality
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht. - kekekke2yrKommentiert
bro is it a she or he make your decision
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht. - kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 100 Chapter 100-The Choice(2)
- kekekke2yrKommentiert
please don't change the pov as you like. give a signal or something. another thing is I know you wanna make it funny but please don't make MC dumb like this. it doesn't feel like a 27 years old with these amount of stupidity. a really interesting plot tho!!!
Ch 2 bathroom (final) - kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 2 First mission as an incubus
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his
Hearing the girl's words, Alvine adjusted her emotions and waited patiently for the soft voice to continue. - kekekke2yrKommentiert
her
"I...I have to stop them!" His decision was firm! She sure won't let anyone in this world take her master's virginity like that. - kekekke2yrKommentiert
her
The power of charm belongs only to the succubi and the succubus are all women. To his knowledge, there had never been such anomalies! And the lineage of his master is hundreds of thousands of light-years superior to that of the creators who populate these lands! Let's not even talk about his creatures increasing their forces in lust!' Speaking of Alvine's parents, his eyes sparkled with indescribable admiration. - kekekke2yrKommentiert
she
"That kind of power to charm others doesn't even belong to a lower rank succubus, you have to be at least one level higher than the one you wish to charm for it to have any effect. but the master is clearly 'apprentice' level. and he hasn't even started training with magic yet! And I'm still a mage empress...Our levels are like the distance between heaven and earth. So how did his charm power go? he could have such an effect on me? Besides, he's still unconscious isn't he? How can he have such an effect despite his unconscious state?! It's so creepy!" As she thought about all this, he suddenly realized a small detail. - kekekke2yrKommentiert
*her ?
She even confessed her feelings for Alvine at the age of 20, but Alvine, who had just been betrayed by his colleagues at that time and abandoned by all his friends, no longer trusted anyone but himself. Therefore, he gave him a rake on the pretext that he preferred to focus on his career before any other distraction... - kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 14 Encountering Isaac’s Party!
- kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 8 Chapter 8 - Primo in Bahrain
- kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 43 Power-up (2)*
- kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 40 WTF (1)
- kekekke2yrKommentiertCh 17 Damn it (1)**