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yeah well trees don't fire guns, drive cars, get depressed etc so it's only natural that we are more saddened for the 'helpless' lives than for humans who are mostly mindless. I'd say both of us are broken, ain't we?
Usually I do it to make the entire story as real as possible, even for something trivial - i.e. when Asura dropped from level 12 to 4, I used exponents and logs to calculate exactly what level he'd drop to when three Soul Spirits fused with bases 1.000 and 1.000.000.000. I don't know if that's what other authors do, but I care about it all making sense, otherwise I'll just be wasting the time of both, me and readers who decided to put their trust in me, so... All I can say for sure is, continue to expect me to do my research as long as I continue writing novels. Thank you once again, for your feedback and time! May you have a beautiful day.
I've looked this up just to make sure, and there are the star-forming regions in galaxies which would, if stars formed, after some time slowly make the galaxy expand. All of that is only for our universe, but this story takes place in an entirely different one, as the black hole from the start transported them into this one. Here, since everything can gather energy and evolve, so can galaxies, but the problem with the Celestial Realms galaxy is that it's forcibly suppressed from expanding by the ten Divine Stars. When a planet evolves, it will birth its own consciousness, and the more it evolves, the more developed its consciousness will be. This will also be the case with the micro planet in Asura's Soul World, but further on that when the time comes. The Celestial Realms isn't the only galaxy in that world, but it should be enough to cover the domain of this particular story, as for the other ones, let the time decide :) All in all, this is an entirely different kind of world, even though the most fundamental rules are similar.
Yup, that's how it looks. The reason why Inner Celestial Layer has more energy is because of its closeness to the central star - the core, while the outermost planets lack it because of the distance between them. And to add on top of all that, there are ten sun-like stars that suppress the galaxy from expanding. I expect this world to be quite fun to develop as the story progresses, but let's see how it goes : )
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Oh that, there are parts like that but when its just dialogue, It'd easier to put : after a name and end it all
It aint plural :?
Thank you for giving feedback about this. I've seen a few novels written in this style with name: "Spoken words" or name: 'thoughts'. If i replaced : with , this is how it'd look; Xia, "Today is a good day to kill." IMO a , doesn't sit nice in this format. In that place : seem more appropriate. If i had to use , then the sentence would look like this: Xia looked up and said, "What a beautiful day to kill". Here I think the usage of , is justified since there's an entire sentence before quotation marks, but if it was just Xia without the >looked up and said< part, it won't be wrong but I personally like : more.
It is only for the sake of teasing and richness of character, it naturally won't continue throughout the entire story.
First of all, thank you for going out of your way to write a review this early on in the novel. About Xia's twin, I can't say much at this time because that's a major spoiler for Xia's true identity. Most likely it will only be revealed at the time when the two reach Spirit Star (the massive planet at the center), which would mean when they transcend to immortality (level 100+). The only thing I can say for now is that she is Xia's other half and Xia's memories are hidden with her, which will gradually be revealed later on in the story. Before breaking through the level 100, the two Souls will become one, so by then most of the information hidden in that half will become known to us.
He lacks sister then, cause Godsuya has feelings only for his sister although slowly the feelings started returning to him it's just that he doesn't notice it yet.
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