DetachedDreamer
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I like the author and his past stories. this one is too early to tell but it has a lot of potential. only problem I have is the MC. Characters who have Gojo or Sukuna's powers usually are boring, lack human emotions, and lack any future character growth. The MC, doesn't like anything. cept food. hates people, talking, wasting time (everything's a waste of time to him). He's morally neutral, no loyalties, no faction, no compass to keep him attached to reality. He doesn't have a defined personality so you never know what he's going to do. which is a cheap writing trick, whether its to keep the audience guessing or just to cover up plotholes. Hes one of those types who would take the long way around an ambush instead of quickly resolving the situation and getting to the destination quickly, just to spite weaker folk even if he wastes more time not trying to help. Just so no one gets the idea that he's a hero or will help anyone, even indirectly. A boring MC won't be able to carry a story with out a few shocking deaths so I wonder who it'll be? Maybe im wrong and we will see something more from this MC that I've not seen in the last 50 MCs, who so far seem identical. Still early so I may revise my review.
lol wolverine, not enraged, is one of the most learned martial artists in the "universe." Even his instincts still carry that knowledge. unless he's gotten the metal ripped out of him and he's in a feral state then this is just bull. stop throwing dirt on great characters.
Hands down one of the worst MCs you can read about. hes boring, impatient, emotionless, he gives dead stares, and thats really it. he does love his parents I guess thats something. I mean there's trash then there's this MC. hes worries about batman. trashes on him. he wants to be low key. he gets annoyed when folk ask him questions. I could go on on how bad of an MC this author created but I only read a few chapters. im scared to read more. the story itself would of been awesome if you had a completely different MC. but here we are. this author has been totally corrupted by the fanfic ideology on this app. so sad. because he seems to have talent but with MCs like this its doomed to fail.
so sad he's being low key and he thinks batman is a psycho? the MC's pathetic for that
lol anyone who sees politics in the stuff they don't like are sad, angry, and pathetic. Politics suck. liberals are trash and so are conservatives. this story might suck but we all know you do too. you don't use Google and the multitude of verified articles to research? wait youre not one those anti vaxxers who thinks everything is a conspiracy? ignorant folk question everything yet seek no answers. lol Jesus christ. American Media is trash but you sound very much like a fox News guys. which is no worse than an NBC or CNN guy. stop b*tching about liberals. I bet you use the word beta and simp every day too. Zero friend having *ss. you're on Instagram every day screaming "F*cking Liberals" on random cooking videos because they added to much spice. lolololol
a walking dead story without any of the cast is just another zombie story. Might as well make an original story instead. The villians of the story can only carry this story so far without the drama that put them in conflict in the first place.