Compromised_Owl
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Foreshadowing
Haiz… Jesus Christ
I mean… He’s not that far off, you DID do the most damage.
You will ride that Dragon in more ways than one, my dude.
I mean... He’s unable to feel his body, so feeling pain is already massive progress. I’d say, he doesn’t need to be in lotus position.
I’m sorry, what? Is this a gigolo path that I smell?
<Authors Favorite Luck and Plot-Armor Physique> at work.
Well... Let’s rename the <Heaven Refining Physique> to <Luck and Plot-Armor granting Physique>.
There’s a joke out there about a lightbulb, but I don’t know where I lost it.
Using them in a somekind of experiment I assume.
Limit the amount of ‘...’ in a monologue. It’s used usually as a long pause and having too many of them seems like lazy writing.
He* gets.
Cia will be a problem that’s for sure. Erin? Vampire.
“I’m Batman”
He’s still young. Growth stops at 21 y/o if I remember correctly.
Who doesn’t nowadays?
Changed for the worse.
Should be “ropes” not “robes”. And fhe two letters are quit far from eachother to be a simple misclick.