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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard8mth
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    Thanks for the chapter, and it's good to see you well. ps. Sorry for the bad english

    Ch 4 4: Hidden Power.
    One Piece: Reincarnated as Weevil
    Anime und Comics · BearerofBadNews
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard10mth
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    I am realy liking this story and its concepts, my only fear is that other people had being isekaied to the same time-line as the MC

    Ch 2 Chapter 2- Peaceful arc:  Promotion and mission
    Bleach: Reincarnation went wrong
    Anime und Comics · gunablazer
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard1yr
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    In the servant aspect i think sticking with the original should be ideal, him summoning Fran would open interesting interactions and, just trowing ideas here man, potential romance trying to use the grail to heal his sister and "fix" Fran mental state as well incarnate her. ps sorry for the bad english

    Ch 5 On Edge
    Fate/Along The Edge (Apocrypha SI)
    Anime und Comics · NonToxicRespondent
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard1yr
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    please no Yuri, every interesting story with a female mc ends up as a yuri

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Battle Trial
    My Hero Academia: The White Queen
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    Why a system out of the blue? The progression bar and the word quest really take the suspense out of the situation and appear far too modern for someone like Merlin......

    Ch 6 Book of the Wise
    HP: The Book of the Wise
    Bücher und Literatur · Bored_Hermes
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    +1

    2. Jiro
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    It was amazing

    [A/N]: Well... that happened. I'm not saying that got me...but I almost got something in my eyes writing this. First time my own writings got me that way. I guess I am a little invested in the story sometimes. Not the best written chapter, but I was a fan.
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
    Antwortet auf what_if_3574

    killing the wolfs

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    Naruto: The Wandering Blacksmith
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    Gostei muito da sua estoria até agora mas cara da uma segurada no hate com o Constantine kkkkk ele não é tão ruim assim e ficou meio repetitivo com todo mundo tratando ele que nem lixo.

    Ch 44 A Queda dos Vampiros (4/4).
    DC: The Prince Of The Underworld (PT-BR)
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    I think you should give him a normal shikai, nothing too powerful or overpowered, as you already have told that his bankai will be op so it will be a nice balance and will give the MC challenges in battle and a reason to train harder. Now on the kidou aspect, you should be careful and try just use the cannon ones for now and later in the story the Mc can make some kidous, and will be more believable ( just nothing too absurdly powerful please), hope that I had been of some help. Ps: Waiting for the next chapter

    Ch 3 Reishi awakens
    BLEACH: Ultimate Being
    Anime und Comics · finalgetsuga
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
    Antwortet auf Delusion10

    No problem man I'm just worried that it would become more difficult for you to write, generally, I have no problem with you putting Esdeath in your story and hopes it works. ps: I'm really liking your story

    Ch 4 The Floor Guardians
    Overlord: Reborn as an NPC
    Anime und Comics · Delusion10
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    Why put in Esdeath? It just complicates things for you as you write..... oh well thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 4 The Floor Guardians
    Overlord: Reborn as an NPC
    Anime und Comics · Delusion10
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    And here it comes the unnecessary drama that I hate......, this type of thing just artificially creates conflicts in the story. Author, I really like your story and the world you constructed ( even if it is a fanfic), but I think that you posting a chapter every day is making it difficult to imagine where to go with the story, I can't talk for everyone but I would gladly wait and have something like a chapter a week

    Ch 299 Truth Of The Matter
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    Is Fleur not too old for him ? and why does he blame Filius, he does not know what would hapend and he had a bad fealing at best

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Solitude.
    HP: Eagle Soars
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    Sorry, I forgot.... who is Abrahan?

    Ch 294 The US of A
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Bücher und Literatur · FictionOnlyReader
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    Will he finally meet his beautiful hagraven wife? ps: really hoping that the Dragonborn is not a skilled but a being native of Tamriel and Nirn

    Ch 37 Got Hags?
    Altering Skyrim
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
    Antwortet auf ALiVe

    thank you, I realy had forgoten that

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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    While I'm liking your story this chapter was kind of strange to me, I just don't understand the logic, if the chapter before this one has shown us that he can interact and navigate in this political mess of a school then why is he isolating himself in his own house? the advantages does not compensate for the disadvantages, the little time he could have lost in helping his classmates could have been compensated at another time, logically speaking this way he would create a base to where he could stand in the coming raining days, not to mention that teaching a subject is a nice way to learn more about it as well

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Fool assault
    HP: Eagle Soars
    Bücher und Literatur · SHEOGORATH
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    the thing is that the aburame clan is a middle-level clan and the Hyuuga are one of THE clans of konoha so the idea that one of them is inducted in the root is strange, even more so if the ninja in question is of the branch family as they already suffer from slavery and would not be ok whit gaining one more master and shackle

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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
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  • Brunotheloard
    Brunotheloard2yr
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    nay

    2. Nay
    Webs of Retribution
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