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The only thing I would suggest if you want to expand readership is to post on other platforms such as questionable questing, scribble hub, or perhaps Royal Road. Also, image posting on Webnovel is ass for everyone involved. Half the time, if posted in the comments on the chapter, it isn't there. If you are a reader and come late to a story, you have to scroll through months of author activity to hopefully find the specific image regarding a chapter.
IIRC Allistair was going to wish for the 3rd true magic, and then using heavens feel, reincarnate Morgan. Morgan, unknown to her (at least I think so) inadvertently wished to be reincarnated, then and there, probably thinking that she was conversing with her mother. This caused Allistair to not get his wish for the 3rd, which fucked everything up.
Isn't Alistair still covered under that geas from the beginning of the war that he signed with the other masters? But I think that he should let the clocktower know that Kiritsugu killed his mother, who is the Queen of Britain using his ancestor Artoria and that Irisviel was an accomplice to this. That should clear him of killing Kiritsugu and his wife. Though I don't know what he should do about Illyasviel. If canon goes apace, the next grail war will be in a decade, and she'll have berserker. Much as people will be clamoring to lewd Illya, might be better to either put her in a unbreakable geas, or kill her.
I would like this story more if it was run through a grammar/spell checker. Since the poster didn't even bother doing that, it shows how lazy they are. Frankly, this is not worth my time if they can't even bother doing something as simple as that.
I wonder if the crown would have leave to destroy house Velaryon as its lord would be implicated in trying to assassinate the crown prince and leave it attainted.
Maybe something for the next story the author writes? As long as it isn't France. Though I think it would have to be further back in the timeline, maybe 1000 or 2000 BC? Author writing an Egyptian Pharoah story would be pretty cool.
Momma interrupted Morgan's Snoo-Snoo time.
Daiki was correct in wanting to give MC a wake-up call. However, Inoichi was correct in that it was not his place to do so alone. He could have consulted the other elders and held a meeting between MC and his parents, and if Satoshi persisted with his attitude, adjusted from there.
TFTC, and take your time and study for your exams seriously. Also, the only thing better than Morgan would be to get a Melusine in the mix.
Dreamfyre right? if so, hopefully MC can fully utilize her capabilities. She died an ignoble death in HOTD.