It probably sucks if you have to beg in successful fics to check it out.

Poor Toad... :(

Crai soam moar looosar

Trash story that will get dropped like the dozen other stories the author crapped out. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Dropped like a POS. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3 / 5 Honestly some things are amazing in this novel. Some very interesting ideas and some great scenes and events happen. On the other hand the author made up this parallel world of Harry Potter and he just assumes we "get his version" of the world. Next to nothing gets explained and you get small pieces of information and have to piece things together. MC is some kind of inhuman chinese novel MC who is involved in EVERYTHING, who is in charge of EVERYTHING, who achieved EVERYTHING, knows EVERYONE and is regarded as a harem protagonist. His friends too are just insane even though they are all non canon characters. You only get a small glimpse of his time at hogwarts. You never read a day in his life or get his relationship with most OG characters. This is very hard to read and not very rewarding imo. Overall this is not my kind of fic.

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This quality is exactly the quality you can expect from a typical garbage chinese story. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Cringe so cringe

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GARBAGE STORY, GARBAGE TRANSLATION

Nice translation. Dropping this garbage.

Nice chapter as always :)

You smell your own computer which is in your own room. No wonder you smell a beta. Tough luck cuck.

This is so fucking cringe and retarded. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Still mentioning the abandoned char that was killed off for no reason?

can't even spell intent correctly.

No talent author. A total loser [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Really shit story at least the current 4 chapters released are. While the previous fic had some promise and was overall enjoyable this is pure shit. I think the author is really desperate if he really opened a patreon for this abomination.

Making 10 children when you can not provide for even a single one is pure evil. These children will not get any kind of good education and will be most likely be criminals and menaces who will flee their countries and cause other countries much harm. Also it's extremely selfish to produce 10 kids when the world is already overpopulated. Also these people are usually extremely stupid which will is a joke because that will allow them to literally spread their stupidity on a genetic level.