Malphegor
I am a breathing and living being. I have a passive skill which allows me to inhale air, and then to exhale carbon dioxide. Last but no least, I have a near endless performace of muscle contraction.
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Are some chapters locked? Even if they aren't, I'm not sure if I can complete the whole story of the original work. I've changed so many things that I'm not really translating anymore; I'm only using the original work as a reference. So if you wanted to read the original work, I have to disappoint you
I don't know much about Assassin's Creed, but I may research it a bit. My story will focus on several characters and how they, along with their village, find themselves in a strange world. They realize that the energy system of the foreign world is somewhat similar but more focused in one aspect. They need to slowly learn about the cultures, expand their influence, and grow their village. The main focus will be on kingdom building, daily lives, and doing quests. However, the earlier chapters are focused on character development, which could turn some people off. I only have a few chapters now, so it may take a bit...
I created something similar to Iwa. My energy system was inspired by Naruto, and many elements were influenced by it. I'll give it a shot, and if this doesn't work out, I may change it to Iwa or something else.
Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep it in mind and go through the chapter again. But what do you think about the concept? Would you rather read about a village similar to Iwagakure, or does it need to be Iwagakure (Naruto world)?
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