For being 17 chapters ahead on patreon you sure are uploading slow af

So why did you re-upload this exact copy? You do know its against TOS to fool the algo system for authors re uploading the same story?

Yup I agree with the other comments the past few chapters are a plot drag this is killing the book I can already see through API the views tanked the last 15 chapters. Either mass release this arc or be ready for most to drop this book. Just so you know I like the book but this really is killing it for me

Gonna be honest reading this after the first few chapters is useless; authors who do "past" days after seeing current plot is tasteless. I wonder if you wrote the whole book already if so you should have gone back and fixed these early chapters.

This is absolute ass ngl....... The timeline is fucked and the plot makes no sense You should delete this and rewrite it if you even care Good luck

O at least give us like a 3 chapter release or whatever to finish this whole arc

Upload has been kinda slow; Just wondering have you thought about patreon? You'd make way more posting on there and moving this to fanfic section possibly (I edit for some on here and know they make a decent chunk)

Honestly this reads like crap; starts off by just offing 2 of the main people while the rest are slowly killed off. Like OC mentally fucked person just going around killing the whole plot at this point author.....Maybe give up on writing; its clearly not your forte

So it has to do with a curse or something he has that he found out about that romance with certain people would only last for a short while before it crashes out. Gacha system can't all be OP powers and abilities some of it has negative side effects

Would love a 4-5 chapter release here if possible to read this whole arc in one sitting

Mass release a few chapters to get people hooked

Legit sentences are so ba. Translator needs to get an editor or quit translating.....................................................................

You need to get an editor big time these sentences don't read smoothly. Also you get he and she confused at times.

Yea I hope people realize that the author has a patreon that is overpriced AF for what you get. So he cycles different books when patreon subs go down because people would rather wait a few days then pay basically 2-3 bucks PER CHAPTER. This shit should be pulled off from webnovel if I were them; gives scammer vibes

This has already been made its called golden viper here on web novel. Go look for it in the fanfiction listing................................

Hey author have you thought of a p a t re o n? Like 15-20 chapters ahead of this for like 5 bucks?

last 10 chaps feel like filler that could have been done in 3

and dropped :D thanks for basically just going the book route now I don't have to waste my time trash author go back to fanfict.com loser

a lot of these chapters are starting to feel like filler bs

You need to edit the layout