NoobLord114

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NoobLord1148 months ago
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for op mc , I think author should dwell on side characters more and mc later comes in to sweep the day
As they rode, Adams couldn't help but think about Anderson. He had left him in a personal space to undergo his transformation safely, but he knew he would need to check on him soon. For now, though, his priority was to get to a safer location and plan their next moves.
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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lol , the author has forgotten how strong the mc is
As they rode, Adams couldn't help but think about Anderson. He had left him in a personal space to undergo his transformation safely, but he knew he would need to check on him soon. For now, though, his priority was to get to a safer location and plan their next moves.
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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does he really need a horse , he can probably travel anywhere in the continent
The Omni Shop materialized before him, a holographic interface displaying countless options. Adams navigated through the categories until he reached the section for mounts. He needed something fast, durable, and intelligent. As he scrolled through the options, his eyes caught on a magnificent horse, its coat shimmering with an electric blue hue, streaks of lightning dancing across its body. The description read:
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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*Anderson
After Adams mentioned the boost, he felt a surge of power as Adams removed the necklace given to him by his mother. He vowed to avenge her death and was overwhelmed by the sensations coursing through him. His vision blurred, and he blacked out.
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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easy 😁
"Fate and karma, my friend. That's what I used to discern that Vito guy back there," Adams replied.
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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what's the use in stat points
**[Ding, congratulation to the host for becoming a True Immortal Stage in body, mana, and spirit cultivation. +3000 to all stats (body, mana, and spirit realm cultivation gives +1000 to all stats respectively)]**
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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the End 😅
**[Yes, host, you possess unparalleled power. You are now the apex of existence.]**
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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lol , is it in megatives
Int: 100
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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Str: 5 (weak)
The Omnipotent System
Fantasy · Adams2004
NoobLord1148 months ago
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that's the spirit 😁
Too arrogant!
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