AndaPanda

Overall a very well written book. Leaving out all the typical wish fulfillment and crazy powers and abilities. I love the fact that there is training and struggles to gain the power and abilities the character has and doesn’t just fall into his lap with no common sense. Overall a great book highly recommend!!

I see this done often as authors like to give themselves shameless full star reviews hahaha. Anyways this is my very first story I’m posting on here grammar is pretty bad tho I’m trying to use this as a way to help me improve. I’ve also always liked the puppet path with it being a crafting type of Jutsu. Also that it has so much more potential especially with just a little more creativity I think it could be brought to such greater hight’s. So anyway here is my work constructive criticism is welcome. Or if anyone has thoughts or opinions I’m more than able to hear them out or implement them if they fit or I like it. Thanks! From your new Author and long time story binger on this site Panda out 🐼

I see this done often as authors like to give themselves shameless full star reviews hahaha. Anyways this is my very first story I’m posting on here grammar is pretty bad tho I’m trying to use this as a way to help me improve. I’ve also always liked the puppet path with it being a crafting type of Jutsu. Also that it has so much more potential especially with just a little more creativity I think it could be brought to such greater hight’s. So anyway here is my work constructive criticism is welcome. Or if anyone has thoughts or opinions I’m more than able to hear them out or implement them if they fit or I like it. Thanks! From your new Author and long time story binger on this site Panda out 🐼

Yeah that’s the long term goal for the character to develop in the future. Tho realistically I can’t have him develop such a jutsu so quickly as it shouldn’t be something so simple.

Update soon please!

Shirogane clan!

I’m dying laughing out loud god that got me so good! 😂🤣

Yeah the amount of ridiculous unnecessary words is making this hard to follow. I’ll be dropping this fic sadly such a good story has been ruined.

This is by far one of the best pokemon fan fics I have read to date and I have read a lot of them love the premise and the world and structure being built. The characters main and side are so fleshed out and feel real the relationships and rivals as well as the interactions between pokemon and trainers is done so well. If your looking for a good Pokemon story this by far is your best bet must read I promise you’ll be hooked!!

No harem focus on the story it’s so awesome!! Regular romance is fine but harems just tend to wash out a story or take away from the plot.