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Arthur is a beginner mage at this point of the novel, he can't just put fire and wind and create a master class spell from the elder scrolls universe and as for the cloud and lightning it would take to much mana to cast a spell-like that, and since he is just dealing with a zombie horde its kinda off unnecessary put extra elements.
I read that novel to some point but right now I only remember the staring parts and later on in the story like I'm not really sure but I think mc of that novel gets a castle for himself. What I'm trying to say is I don't know much about that world or the mc to write something about it. BUT I might take Arthur to a world of classical fantasy like elves, dwarfs, and dragons.
This is a slow progression type novel. Arthur you read about in this chapter and Arthur you will see in the final chapter of the novel will not be the same person. He will grow as a person, and if you wondering, I'm not gonna write about a bitch boy who whines all the time. the only thing Arthur will ask from his companions is their loyalty. he will ask these questions from the start and later on if those followers want to be freed from their services Arthur would still let them go. but if there is betrayal worlds will burn.
I don't have a negative view against bad comments or reviews or the peoples who wrote them. The reason why wrote this chapter because there was a misunderstanding between me and the user FrightKnight88, I tried to clear that misunderstanding and use this opportunity to explain some staff stayed too vague on this novel. Like I said above even if I get a 100 one-star review about how shity this novel is, I will still keep posting new chapters on my own pace as long as I like. There is nothing stopping me from doing what like and I have no moneytary expectation from this fanfic. just trying to learn how to express myself in a foreign language before taking things seriously
I post this fanfic because I want my novel to be get judged and improve my writing. This chapter wasn't a rant about getting a bad review. I just tried to clarify a misunderstanding and explain some parts I think stayed too vague. By the way, I'm glad you liked the novel.
at volume 0, I put a power system chapter that I use to scale Arthur's power levels at the end of every chapter but, If what you mean is, would I wrote a chapter to explain power system in numerical levelwise like a level 100 = city block in the power system I use. No, I don't plan to do something like that. It creates too many contradictions when I'm writing a fight scene.
How much mana a clone or multiple clones would have depended on how much mana Arthur decided to spare for the clones. Like you said since this is a fanfic I decided to change a couple of things about how some skills work and their energy costs to make things more convenient for me
For those who don't know Spanish, user DiperZ says " This story is a meh the MC is the typical MC that you can find in a lot of novels only that the author wants to make him seem more intelligent, I don't know why buy magic meditation instead of buying the passive breathing technique that he does with the time you get to 100 stats in all fields stupid " - I don't know Spanish too, so I used google translate for it, which means this translation might not be the exact thing user DiperZ tries to say
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İf you mean something like an animal turning into a human and becoming part of the protagonist harem. There will be no such a thing in this story (NO Harem, No Beastiality) İt's just a magical wolf. not going to have a human body at any point of the story. Think of it as an animal companion from the avatar (cartoon)
It's like you don't want to harm an innocent animal regardless of how dangerous it is but if one had to die between yourself or the animal, I think everybody would choose themself in instant. When I mention Arthur killed two bears I tried to show it as self-defense like he didn't do it for sake of some exp or getting meat to eat or pelts for crafting armor. I meant to show a more humane side of Arthur like showing regret for what happened with those animals since when Gamer's Mind intervenes during the fights it keeps Arthur from showing pity towards his enemies so chapters after this one he will usually use more brutal tactics against his enemies. --------- I might not able to properly explain this kinda stuff in every chapter but if you find anything that you think doesn't make any sense or doesn't sound right, you can always ask them to me in the comments. I'll do my best to explain it I don't want to hide behind the "this is my second language " thing but sometimes it's hard to express what I had in my mind for that chapter exactly as I planned because of it.
if it's a "normal" monster like a goblin or an ogre, chopping of its legs and let it be like that would cause it to bleed out and die but for an undead monster like a zombie chopping the legs would only cause dome fatal damage. It will hurt the monster but not kill it
when you stand face to face with a wild animal you dont go and think " I'm in it's territory so it has right to kill me for disturbing it's natural way of life" ... nope you do your best to survive the encounter. When Arthur meet those bears he was yet to meet Korin and learned about the werewolfs living in this island. he was still looking for human civilization to live with. he didnt enter to forest for sake of killing animals. he only put some traps around his house to protect his home