FireGolem

Hi Z, If you want to drive people to your Patreon you should have early access to chapters on there perhaps between 5-10 chapters ahead of the current story, you've said that you've already got some chapters saved up so maybe you can make use of those to get people to join the patreon.

How come she didn't mention Hydra?

Option 1, but you could make it so that the people that finish their region first would unlock AUs where they could reobtain pokemon/items as well as new stuff that can only be found in that AU

This is stolen from the great author flameclaws my saber comes crashing down, down, down on you the thief that has stolen content. We never sleep, we hunger for everything you hold dear. Run, Fear Us, Cry. None of those things will save you from our wraith.

Honestly seeing him be dragged along is annoying, just say no, tell people that you don't want to spend money.

Applin is an excellent Pokemon that I don't see in many fics but your farmer would definitely make good use of it.

They're all being posted by the same guy which is why they're so bad he's posted like 7 of these each with about 100 chapters all of bad quality and inability to spell names right.

This seems way more interesting that I thought it would be, I thought you'd do the boring thing of making her a hero.

About 5 of the chapters are repeats and makes reading this a total mess if they don't fix this then this shouldn't be continued in any form what so ever

isn't it already known that she has a license to practice Chinese medicine or is that just me