neobenmike

it becomes dumber and dumber to the point that a paragraph has its own title

Dumbass mc doing dumbass shit doing his best to rub two dying braincells together

a pedo story of grooming

This is shit, why would I support shit

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good enough, but be warned that the same overused character like ace will have a major part in this fanfiction as author admitted, if you are tired reading about overused one piece characters then this isn't for you

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hopefully he won't be kiyotaka's doormat using guilt and whatever

It was a good idea that is executed abysmally, it is sheer brain rot with too much stupidity, I can only suspend my disbelief a foot or two high but not suspend it into space

Boiled down to kissing xiao yan's ass and sucking yao chen's dick, mc even spread his own ass cheeks wide open for both to fuck him hard. If you are tired reading the same trope of mc's whoring themselves to xiao yan and yao chen, then this isn't for you