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Your Manga Sucks, I’ll Prove It!

In a world where humanity’s sins birth abominations of pure malice known as phantoms Garridan Wraith has found himself with a unique opportunity. He can screw over the mangaka who ruined the series, and he’ll do it by destroying the plot one arc after another! Heroines and villains beware, the man punished by the mysterious mangaka to live in this world is taking it in stride! What to expect: A morally grey and often times evil main character. Yanderes, lots of those. Smut, this is p0rn with plot. Big harem, almost every female character in the story kind of big. A world that despite supposedly being the setting of a shonen story is filled with nightmares and calamities definitely not for younger eyes. Complex power system, suspense and action stemming from limitations and conditions. Monster hunting, the phantoms aren't going to kill themselves after all! I plan on posting everyday, schedule kind of depends on work though so be warned. Thanks for reading, Useless out! Additional Tags: Battle Academy | Clingy lover | Comedic Undertone | Conditional Power | Confident Protagonist | Contracts | Elemental Magic | Hard-working Protagonist | Harem-seeking Protagonist | Human-Nonhuman Relationship | Incest | Love Interest Falls in Love First | Magic | Male Yandere | Monster Girls | Monster Society | Obsessive Love | Strong Love Interests | Strong to Stronger | Overpowered You can find this story on Scribblehub: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/771215/your-manga-sucks-ill-prove-it/ And if you'd like to support then here is my Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/uselessdegenerate I don't know how this platform works as an author so if you could support me with this thing’s equivalent of a like or even add it to your reading list I would greatly appreciate it.

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Chapter 31: You’re A Wizard Akari Pt. 3

"Do you have any suggestions on how we can speed up the cast time without shortening it and losing power?" I asked Akari who stared at my flickering form as I constantly muttered the movement spells name over and over again stepping from side to side and trying to increase the speed of it.

The stupid fucking mangaka created this damn restriction but what does he do with it? He throws it out the window as Aradia shows up towards the end of the Witch War Arc and starts lobbing spells without even naming them. I can't physically recreate that feat because with an existence such as the Weltgeist enforcing the rules placed on the use of said spells. When I think about casting with just my imagination the most I achieve is a little flicker and then nothing. There has to be a workaround, maybe I could over—

"You could overload the spell with geist, the volatility will increase but you can apply [Geist Control] to maintain the spell matrix long enough for the technique to consume all of the geist without it exploding." Uh, damn she's smart and really sexy when she talks nerdy to me.

"Great minds think alike as they say, let's try it!" I stood perfectly still, a massive amount of geist was being channeled through the circuits in my legs and down to my feet. "Doppelschritt!"

Crack—!!!

The sound of stone shattering underfoot filled the air, the spell fizzling out as I stood on the opposite end of the pagoda. From under my feet smoke billowed as my shoes had been superheated to the point of melting, it was a partial success as not all of the geist had been used up. The potential damage that could've been done to my feet was proof of the spell's volatile nature.

"Hmm, the matrix is too narrow to funnel that much geist in a short period of time so we need a way to maintain stability with the unused geist to maximize the speed we could gain." Akari put her finger to her chin as she spoke, her face a mask of deep concentration.

"What if we delayed saying the spells name until after we activated it?"

"How would we—?"

*Snap*

"Doppelschritt." I stood in front of Akari with a grin on my face, her azure eyes widening at the sight. Instant jumpscare capability achieved!

"Y-you tethered the activation of the spell to the sound of you snapping your fingers!" She practically squealed but in truth, her deadpan voice just raised a little.

"Yep, and because I say the spell's name at the end I gain the benefits of its stability but get this, the spell felt even stronger with the delay. It's like a built-in buff!" My eyes turned out toward the pagoda's exit, my hand forming into a finger gun.

The act of shaping my fingers in such a way is a somatic command, and geist began forming at the tip of my index finger. The orb crackled with white lightning as it grew to the size of around a baseball, far larger than its base counterpart. The overloaded geist was kept at bay using [Geist Control] to put pressure around it from all sides. My nose picked up the smell of burnt ozone, and the scratching sound of electric sparks looking for a place to ground filled the air. And then the orb of destruction at the tip of my finger sped through the air like a bat out of hell, a trail of glowing pale light following behind it. Just as it reached the outside of the pagoda, I began the incantation.

"Geistermagie-Zerstörungszauber Nummer eins: Manablitz!" A deafening boom rocked the pagoda as its walls shuddered, the thump it made against my chest nearly took my breath away. The orb of light had burst in an explosion of crackling sparks and devastating force, and the power of the basic spell had been increased by 3. It was freaking awesome!

*Snap*

"Doppelschritt." Akari was right in front of me, her pale slender arms wrapping around my neck before I was pulled into a searing hot kiss. Her slimy tongue battered at the edge of my lips and I was happy to let the little intruder in, my mouth opening to accommodate her. The wet slurping of our kiss grew louder as we both felt at our naked bodies. My hands grabbed hold of her massive tits before, the tips of my fingers sinking in the soft silky feeling of her massive melons.

"What's this...for?" I asked as our kiss broke with sticky strands of saliva still kept between our lips. Our breaths were ragged and by my raging boner, and her damp cunny we were both horny to no end.

"Teaching me, no one has ever spent the time to help me like this. I was always seen as weak and useless, unworthy of anyone's time. You've given me something that I have dreamed of ever since I was banished to the branch family, you've given me a way to express myself." Despite lacking any emotion her sincere words sounded so sweet to my ears. One of my hands raised from her doughy breasts and grabbed hold of her chin as I lifted her face up toward mine.

"If you're willing after class every Friday we can have...tutoring lessons, each time we'll work on a new spell. Does that sound good?" I kissed her lips and pulled back to await her answer. My emerald eyes looked at her with hungry desire, and my throbbing dick pressed against her soft tummy smearing precum along her porcelain skin.

"Yeah—I'd like that." Her delicate breath tickled against my saliva-soaked lips, the cool sensation it made sending goosebumps across my skin. Our tongues collided and my hands returned to feeling every inch of her body, it seems Akari was interested too as her hands began rubbing at my abs and pecs.

"Do you want me to take care of you down there? You look needy" I asked in between our tongue battle, saliva drizzling from my tongue into her open mouth. Akari's eyes were damp, and they only grew more damp at the offer. Her hips bucked up against me as her sopping wet puss rubbed against my thigh stuck in between her spread legs.

"Only...only if I get to help you with this." Her slender fingers grabbed hold of my scalding hot dick, the cool sensation of her skin sending a shudder down my spine. With uncoordinated strokes only someone without a dick would have she gave me a very amateur handjob, but it had a novelty all on its own.

"Deal, let's lay on this." I conjured an inky bed of shadows, dark aether made manifest into silky sheets cool to the touch. The soft down of the mattress didn't come from feathers but from hundreds of shadowy springs that compressed when I laid on it.

"Your pussy goes here, and your mouth goes there." I pointed toward my face and then my twitching dick. Akari's eyes seemed to gleam in recognition as she walked toward the bed, a small smile playing on her lips.

"Sensei you really are a pervert, aren't you?" Her monotone voice came from above me as her thighs straddled my face. The sight of her pretty pink slit, and puckered little asshole had my dick twitching as precum dripped from the tip. My nose took in the heady smell of her arousal as her dripping wet pussy lowered on my open mouth.

"Guilty as charged." My breath tickled at her quim, goosebumps covering her body. Her pillowy thighs tightened around my head and I finally understood why someone might wanna be crushed by a girl's thighs. My tongue flattened as I took a long languid lick of her sweet love juice, unlike the other girls her femcum tasted like honey. She shuddered as my tongue spread the outer folds of her pussy, her hands balancing against my abs to prevent her from falling.

"Hmmmmmf...good." Her sweet voice filled the air and her damp breath sent a tingle down my spine as I felt it brush against my dick. The sensation of her velvety lips pressing against my glans and her making a 'chu' sound as she kissed me had precum leaking from my tip. Akari's tongue began by licking the precum off of my cockhead, the way it swirled around my head sent arcs of lightning through my vision. She was inexperienced and at the same time, her very meticulous nature meant that she could recreate any action she saw with precise if not stiff movement.

"W-where....ugh, fuck...did you learn to do this Akari?" I asked as my fingers of one hand began spreading her slit, my tongue dragging across the strands of femcum inside the folds of her cunt. My other hand inserted two fingers in her pussy as I began rubbing back and forth sending shudders through the red bomb shell's thighs.

"Oooh...t-the girls at school gave me a book, and it had a scene where the heroine...hah...got in the same position with her lover..." Her cute little moans as she spoke encouraged me to tease her more, the pace of my fingering growing quicker. My tongue made contact with the erect little nub of her clit as it swirled around it. The redhead's body tensed, a muffled groan escaping her lips still busy wrapping around the head of my dick.

Her mouth slid further down the veiny shaft of my dick as her body loosened from her first orgasm. Eventually, though her mouth met its match and about halfway down her gag reflex kicked in as she gagged on my dick. Saliva poured down my dick like warm syrup as she removed her mouth from my cock. There for a second I was worried she would throw in the towel but when I felt her hand begin smearing the saliva she left on my shaft I groaned in relief. Her mouth returned to the top half of my dick in a single stroke before the entrance to her throat coiled around me as she choked. The other half of my dick was busy receiving a rhythmic handjob by her as she stroked my shaft with alternating levels of pressure. The sensation on my dick felt absolutely heavenly as her cheeks hollowed out as she began sucking.

"I'll have to thank those girls when I see them because you're doing fucking incredible!" My fingers inside her coiling folds curled up as I began scraping her G-spot with ruthless efficiency. Her shuddering moans sent a pleasant tingle through my dick as it was massaged by the coiling tongue of her drooling mouth.

The sound of her gagging grew more rapid as her pace increased, her hands stroking the base of my shaft tightening as she began milking me. Precum spat from the tip of my dick at the same volume as a normal man's ejaculation, the redhead licked it up like it was the finest ambrosia. Her drooling pussy lips kept drizzling femcum into my awaiting mouth, the sweet taste of honey spreading across my tastebuds. We were both nearing our limit.

"S-sensei I'm going to cum!" Her words were followed by her once again wrapping her plush lips around my dick, the warm sensation along with her vibrating moans as her body shuddered sent me over the edge. Spurt after spurt of gooey ropey spunk hit the back of her throat with the force of a fire hose. Akari's thighs tightened down hard around my head as a gush of sweet femcum splashed across my face and open mouth. The taste of honey mixed with the tart taste of her squirting love juices made for a delicious combination. Our groans filled the air as we savored each other's taste and basked in the afterglow of our orgasms.

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The sound of her pillowy lips pulling away from my cock filled the air. With wobbly legs she sat up, her drenched cunny separated from my mouth with wet strands of spit and femcum bridging the gap between us. As she stepped off the bed, the sound of her feet forced me to sit up and see what the hell she was doing. The sight that followed will forever be burned in my memories as one of the hottest things I ever seen.

"Itadakimasu Sensei." She spoke with her lips parted, my pearly white seed filling her mouth. Her fingers wiped at a few strands of jizz that had escaped outside of her mouth, her azure eyes looking directly at me as she swallowed with an audible gulp. Her pink tongue dragging across the fingers covered in my spunk was a painfully slow process as she made sure I saw every second of it.

"That was great Akari, this Friday we'll pick up where we left off." I walked toward her and gave her a peck on the lips, my body fading into motes of light as I exited her mind space.