Drunken fools

the girl : I'm sorry I hadn't locked the door, I'm such a dummy .

Bong soon: (shy)Noo its my fault I should've knocked.

the girl : Its okay ,look at it this way if you hadn't come in i wouldn't have anyone to help me with my zipper

Bong soon: I guess so...

Bong soon helps her then goes to another changing room to try on her jeans. She comes out of the the changing room

Myung Soo: Wow it's a perfect fit let's get those .

She goes back in and changes back into her clothes then they head to the cashier.

Bong soon: This time I'll pay.

Myung Soo: I thought you're out of money

Bong Soon: I am but I'm going to use my emergency card .

The girl from the changing room and party walks up to the cashier

Myung Soo: (surprised) Eunnie!

The girl:(surprised) Myung Soo !

Myung Soo:What are you doing here?

The girl: (teasingly) What,can't an average girl shop in the VIP section?

Myung Soo:(shy)That's not what I meant.

The girl:I've got a special someone treating me ,I didn't rob a bank.

Myung Soo: Ahhh Soo Hyun ?

the girl: (chuckles)Aish you've gotten even cuter than your brother.

Myung Soo: And youve gotten even prettier.

The girl : (teasingly) Wasn't I already pretty

Myung Soo:(shy) No that's not what I meant

the girl: (laughing) You're still gullible.

Myung Soo: We miss you at school .

The girl: Aigoo you're so sweet ,and is this your girlfriend.

Myung Soo: No she's my friend , Bong Soon this is Goo Hae Ra.

Hae Ra:No need to be shy I saw her earlier in the changing room she's nice.Anywho I have to go nice seeing you .Say hi to your brother.

Myung Soo: Okay byeee

....

Bong Soon: You know her.

Myung Soo: Yeah she used to learn at Sarawa High.

Bong Soon:Only that?

Myung Soo: Yes what does my curious Bong Soon want to know.

Bong soon: Nothing ...

Myung Soo: Okay if you say so,now let's hurry I've got one more place I want you to see then we'll go home

He takes her to the Namsang tower.

Myung Soo:You can't live in Korea and not know this place.

Bong Soon: The Namsang tower ,I've only seen it in kdramas.

Myung Soo: Well now you're here!

Bong Soon :It's really pretty .

Myung Soo takes her to the Namsang tower locks.

Bong Soon: Wow I know this place.This is where couples put their locks .

Myung Soo:Yeah isnt it beautiful.

Bong Soon: (looking around in awe)It is .

Myung Soo: Come let me show you the lock my mom ,Min Ho and I put.She said we were the loves of her life.

Bong Soon: She sounds like a nice person ,I wish I got to see her.

Myung Soo: She'd like you.

Bong Soon hugs Myung Soo, and whispers into his ears "thank you for today".

Myung Soo: Anything for my Bong Soon....Ahh enough sobbing let's go home we don't want to be late for dinner.

Bong Soon: You're having dinner with us?

Myung Soo: No you're having dinner with us.

They arrive home as Min Ho and Mr Chan have just started having dinner .

Mr Chan : Ahhh you're back.I thought you weren't going to make it in time for dinner . let me get your plates.

Myung Soo:(laughing) Like I'd miss dinner

Min Ho: What's she doing here?

Placing a plate in front of Bong Soon at the table

Mr Chan: Be nice ,I invited her.

Bong Soon: Thank you .

Min Ho: You didn't even consult me . I'm also a member of this family.

Myung Soo: What do you have against her.

Mr Chan:Since when did I have to consult you , Aish you have no manners.

Myung Soo: I told you so!

Mr Chan : You also have no manners.

Bong soon starts laughing and they all stare at her.

Bong Soon: (embarrassed)What?

Min Ho: What's so funny?

Bong Soon:You

Min Ho :What!

Bong Soon: You're such a cry baby.

Myung Soo and Mr Chan laugh

Bong Soon: You too Myung Soo, it's like you're twins

Bong Soon and Mr Chan laugh whilst Min Ho and Myung Soo whimper.

Mr Chan:Aigoo ,she's funny i like her. Now let's eat.

They have their dinner then Myung Soo gets a phone call

Mr Chan: Aish this kid has no manners I told you no phones at the table.

Myung Soo: (on the phone)Ahh Shin you ditched us today but we still had fun without you.....(excitedly)What!....Are you sure....I knew you'd come through....Yes I'm with her....We'll be there..(ends call)

Mr Chan: What was that about.

Myung Soo: Well Bong Soon and I just got invited to a party tonight.

Bong Soon:What?Me?Party?

Myung Soo:Yeah Shin felt bad about ditching us.Dad can we go?

Mr Chan: Mmmm on two conditions .

Myung Soo: What?

Mr Chan:You get the Kims permission and take your boring brother with you .

Min Ho :What! Why do I have to go.

Mr Chan: You've never gone to a party and you're almost through with highschool it's worrying to a parent you know.

Min Ho: (embarrassed) What ! I've been to many parties. You just didn't know.

Mr Chan :If you say so but I'm not changing my mind , you're going with them .You'll make sure they dont get into trouble.

Min Ho :(chuckles)Aww you want me to babysit.

Mr Chan: Call it what you want.

Min Ho:You should've started with that, okay I'll make sure these two kids don't get into trouble .

Bong Soon: You realise we're in the same stream right.

Min Ho: Yes but your still 17.

Bong Soon: Give me a couple weeks then you'll see who's a kid.Plus my parents haven't even agreed yet.

Myung Soo :Well I just texted your mom and she said she's cool with it. She says have fun.

Bong Soon: Aish that woman is never on my side.I don't even have anything to wear

Myung Soo:Just wear what you bought today.

Bong Soon: But I only got jeans.

Myung Soo: I also got you that sweater you were eying in the men's section.

Bong Soon:(excitedly) Omo this is cool .Thank you my Magician .

Min Ho :(chuckles) You already have pet names for each other.

Myung Soo: Don't mind him .Now you owe me two favours.

Bong Soon: I don't mind I was going to go back tomorrow and buy it.

Myung Soo: Okay everybody go get dressed. Bong Soon you can use one of the extra rooms.

Bong Soon: Okay thanks

They all get dressed and get down before her. Bong Soon comes down the stairs and everyone's eyes are on her

Min Ho: OMG ,that's what you're wearing?

Bong Soon: What's wrong with it .It's nice and comfortable .

Min Ho: Nice and comfortable my foot.

Bong Soon: My outfit looks almost like yours.

Min Ho:Exactly you look like a boy.

Myung Soo: I think it's cute.

Mr Chan:She looks lovely .

Bong Soon: (feeling shy)Thank you.

Min Ho:Believe their lies it's on your head .We expect a princess then we get prince charming.

Bong Soon: (teasingly) At least I'm charming .

Min Ho: Aish let's go ,I'm driving.

Myung Soo :(in English) Lets get ready to party!!!

They drive up to Shin Won Ho's house.

Bong Soon :Wowwwwwww

Myung Soo: Your still amazed by houses.

Bong Soon :Don't judge me .Omo are all these cars of people in there.

Min Ho :(chuckles )Nope those are just theirs, there's a parking space elsewhere for guests

Bong Soon: OMG rich people.

Min Ho :(whispering into her ear)You're one of them.(outloud)Let's go in!

They enter and the party is in full motion. everyone is dancing and there's even a dj.

Myung Soo: Shins parties are always the best. He even has celebrities sometimes. (whispering to Bong Soon )You might even run into SeHun.

Bong Soon :(shouting excitedly) For real!

Min Ho:(annoyed)Get a room.

Myung Soo: Actually stay with her for a minute I need to look for Shin bye..

Myung goes off leaving Min Ho and Bong Soon

Min Ho:(walking away) Bye ,don't do anything stupid.

Bong Soon:(annoyed ) Alone again . Okay let me find a corner to sit in then play games.

Bong Soon wonders around the house then gets into an office.

Bong Soon :Aahh this is the only quiet place in this house.

She looks around the office then drops a book from a book case by mistake and finds a family picture in it .She sees Mr Shin from her house with Shin Won Ho's family

Bong Soon:Omo it's his grandfather

Suddenly Shin Won Ho enters

Won Ho: What are you doing here?

Bong Soon:(quickly putting it back) Nothing I was just looking for a place to play games

Won Ho: Okay ,let's go back downstairs

Bong Soon: Okay.Is SeHun here by any chance?

Won Ho :No why would he be here.He already came last week.

Bong Soon:(sobbing) What!

Won Ho: What's the problem .

Bong Soon :(sulking ) Nothing....

They get downstairs and Won Ho leaves Bong Soon near the drinks.She starts looking around but she can't tell apart the alcohol and the soda so she asks some girl who's also there .She takes 3 sodas and goes off into a corner and starts playing games

Bong Soon :This soda tastes weird ,must be because it's from a different continent than I was used to.

She continues to game and drink until she's finished her sodas . She goes back go get more and runs into Min Ho

drunken fools

Min Ho: You're drinking alcohol .

Bong Soon :Its not alcohol it's soda

Min Ho :I know alcohol when i see it and that's definitely alcohol .

Bong Soon:Aish that girl lied to me.

Min Ho: Do you expect anything nice from people who hate you.Ahhh you're even more gullible than I thought.You should've just stuck to drinking the fruit punch instead ,like me.

Bong Soon: I heard that this was you first party but that's just stupid. The fruit punch is always spiked.

Min Ho :What!So am I drunk..

Bong Soon: I don't know.

Min Ho :(laughing) I should have stayed home

Bong Soon: Me too

Min Ho: I see three Prince charmings

They both laugh

Both:Omo are we going to die!(they both start screaming )

Myung Soo rushes to them

Myung Soo: (annoyed) These kids I should've never left you.

Min Ho: Who are you calling a kid?

Myung Soo: Aish you, you're drunk, weren't you supposed to be looking out for us.

Bong Soon: I think he just wanted to come to his first party have you ever been invited

Min Ho: (chuckles)I'm the most popular guy at school .Of course I'm invited to every party.I just never want to attend any of them.

Bong Soon: Awww So you're too cool for parties?

Min Ho: Yes I'm too grown for these kiddie parties. I only attend real parties.

Bong Soon: So why did you come here

Min Ho: I...I...came for

He throws up before finishing his sentence. Bong Soon also throws up.Everyone looks at them.

Myung Soo: (annoyed) You've ruined the night let's go back home .

He gets Bong Soon and Min Ho to the car with the help of Won Ho then drives home .

He gets there then drags them inside the house.

Min Ho: Dad!!Dad!! We're back

Myung Soo:( placing his hand over Min's mouth) Shut up ,do you want to get us into trouble.

Mr Chan comes downstairs

Mr Chan:What's going on here.Didn't think you'd be back so soon.

Myung Soo: These kids ruined the whole night they got drunk before I could even do anything .

Mr Chan: Do what?

Myung Soo: Just dancing .Anywho why am I getting questioned you should be scolding these guys.

Bong Soon: (sulking )Sorry Mr Chan, I only asked if it was alcohol or soda,but that mean girl lied to me ,it's not my fault I couldn't differentiate the two.Why mee(she starts crying)

Min Ho:Aishh stop being such a drama queen. You're such a dummy how could you not tell which was alcohol .

Bong Soon: Its not like you noticed the punch was spiked.

Mr Chan: Aigoo what to do now,we can't send her home like that .

Myung Soo: She can sleep in one of the other rooms.

Mr Chan:Okay I'll call her parents you take her upstairs

Myung Soo: Okay dad.

Mr Chan: And don't do anything funny.

Myung Soo: Aish I'm not a pervet .I'm won't do anything to this little flower right here.

Myung Soo takes her to the room whilst Mr Chan takes Min Ho to his room

Sunday morning

Bong Soon: (confused) What happened to me....Omo this isn't my room...

She gets out of bed and is satisfied to see she's still wearing her clothes she opens her door as Min Ho is passing by

Min Ho: What are you staring at

Bong Soon follows him downstairs where Mr Chan and Myung Soo already are

Mr Chan: You finally woke up, it's almost the afternoon

Bong Soon: I'm so embarrassed, ahhh my head hurts .

Mr Chan: (laughing) Hangovers are the worst and it's your first. Get well soon.

Bong Soon:Thank you

Myung Soo: Come I already made breakfast for you come and eat (drags her to the kitchen)

Bong Soon:(excitedly) Pancakes!!!

Myung Soo: Yes from your very own magician .

Min Ho: Where's mine.

Myung Soo :You can make your own .

Min Ho: What's so special about her ,I'm your brother.

Myung Soo:(teasingly) Everything,

absolutely everything .

Bong Soon:Omo our Myung Soo is so sweet.

Min Ho:(annoyed) She eats here and even sleeps here at this rate she might end up living here by next week.

Myung Soo: I wouldn't mind.

Mr Chan:Me neither ,Anywho kids I have to go.Bong Soon your mother said Mr Cho will come to pick you up.

Bong Soon: Okay thank you.Have a nice day!

Myung Soo:(staring at her) Ahh she's like a little ray of sunshine.

Min Ho: Sunshine my foot

Myung Soo: And you're the dark cloud trying to block her.

Bong Soon: Do you two ever stop bickering

Both: We're not bickering !

Myung Soo: Eat up then help me pack.

Bong Soon: Okay but I need to bath after I eat.

Min Ho: Yeah you reak.

Bong Soon: (chuckles) So do you.

Min Ho: (teasingly) Its my manly scent (walks away )

She finishes having breakfast then after bathing changes into the clothes Myung Soo left for her then goes back downstairs

Min Ho and Myung Soo stare at her in awe

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