Versatile mage fan fiction

Definitely has a lot of potential, considering the fact that not many Versatile Fanfics actually existed. If I may though, I would suggest a simple spell/grammar checker like Google Docs, Microsoft Word, or Grammarly. Google Docs is pretty much free. it would go a long way to attracting more readers and improving your skills as a writer.

it would be nice if author expands those first 5 chapter to novel type 40 vhapters.. it is a nice summary story fic thanks for fic author-kun

I give you points for it being a rare versatile mage fanfic and that it's readable. The main complaint I have with this is, is that It's just an overview and just lists of facts and plot points of canon events mixed in with your OC. there isn't much of a story to read. No character character development; Your OC design was bare minimum; you didn't try to do anything new. I actually fully read 10 chapters before I called it quits. My hope is that if, and when you do come back to writing, that you can write a proper story. You don't have to re-write this one, you can start something new.

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Great story. Mpre chapters please。◕‿◕｡🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺。◕‿◕｡[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Определенно имеет большой потенциал, учитывая тот факт, что на самом деле существовало не так много универсальных фанфиков. Если позволите, я бы предложил простую проверку орфографии / грамматики, такую как Google Docs, Microsoft Word или Grammarly. Google Docs в значительной степени бесплатный. это будет иметь большое значение для привлечения большего количества читателей и улучшения ваших навыков как писателя