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Unravel The World

Autor: Chuzi
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Lesen Sie den Roman Unravel The World des Autors Chuzi, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.Clickbait╰( ・ ・ )~>>Come take a look#WSA2022#ItsmyfirstevernovelsopleaselikeandsubscribetowinaheartIf you liked the legendary Mechanic's power System they you'll love what I'm doing here.It's a mix o...

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Clickbait╰( ・ ・ )~>> Come take a look #WSA2022 #Itsmyfirstevernovelsopleaselikeandsubscribetowinaheart If you liked the legendary Mechanic's power System they you'll love what I'm doing here. It's a mix of Norse mythology world building, but reimagined and Futuristic-cky... There will be Romance....one day. Synopsis Come into a world of Swords and Magic, A world of Energy weapons and Futuristic Technology. Eze jumped through a portal he dreamt about and found himself in another world, that he also, dreamt about Come follow his adventure as he awakens to the WORST class. A space Mage. He also wondered how the legendary Space Mage class that others from his old world were dreaming of could be labeled as trash. Turns out this world- a humongous wonder of Energy-Organic life fusion (dubbed the Cosmic Tree), apart from releasing a steady cloud of Cosmic Energy for Users to train also poses restrictions on only one specific sub-class, guess which? Space Mage. But that's Okay because when you come from another world where there's no Energy to train your expectations were already low, at least you have something, right? Except this world also has more to it than that. The almighty tree God(non-sentient, they said) also does the miraculous job of connecting worlds from one end of the Cosmos, to the other and has amassed a total of 39 races, with humans, not being one of them. And he's being told to hide the fact that he's human with no explanation except it could cause his world to fall Sigh. "I've learned a lot this week, bit why does it feel like I've only scratched the surface." "Also I hate people so I don't mind if Earth blows u-" "WHAT? You mean that it would affect me by association to Earth?" "****!" **** If you decide not to add to library. Then; Add to library at least! Add to library ;kneeling emoji I basically cover 'borrowed' from online so if it's yours, just alert me in the comment section... #WSA 2022 I won't tell you what to put in your reviews, but it's my first work, EVER Edit It appears I may have chosen a less mainstream genre thereby hindering my chances so how's this? I will put....[drumroll~] WEREWOLVES!!!

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ForerunnerOfSky · Krieg
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Der Verlobte des Teufels

Eine Liebe, die von Anfang an zum Scheitern verurteilt war, eine verlorene Sache, ein verlorener Kampf - und doch sind beide Herzen nicht bereit, bis zum Ende loszulassen. ----- Arlan Cromwell, der Inbegriff des perfekten Kronprinzen. Alles was er will, ist ein normales Menschenleben zu führen, aber das Leben eines Drachen ist alles andere als normal. Er hat nur ein Ziel - seine entlaufene Verlobte zu finden und sie zu enthaupten. Was passiert, wenn er herausfindet, dass die Frau, die sein Herz erobert hat, diejenige ist, die er zu töten geschworen hat? Oriana, eine Schwarze Hexe, die sich als Mann verkleidet hat, war ihr ganzes Leben lang auf der Flucht, ohne zu wissen, wovor sie wegläuft. Als die Geheimnisse ihrer Vergangenheit sie langsam einholen, hat sie niemanden, an den sie sich wenden kann ... außer Arlan. Doch als sie erfährt, dass der Mann, dem sie ihr Herz geschenkt hat, derselbe ist, der sie töten will, wie kann sie da die grausame Karte akzeptieren, die ihr das Leben zugedacht hat? Zwei Menschen mit Geheimnissen, die es zu bewahren gilt, Identitäten, die es zu verbergen gilt, und Antworten, die es zu finden gilt. Wird der Drache in der Lage sein, seine Gefährtin zu beschützen, wenn die Dunkelheit droht, Oriana zu entführen? ----- Auszug- "Hätte ich gewusst, dass du meine Verlobte bist, hätte ich dich gleich bei unserer ersten Begegnung getötet." Arlans Blick verfinsterte sich hasserfüllt. "Hätte ich gewusst, dass ich mit dir verlobt bin, hätte ich mich umgebracht, bevor du mich umgebracht hast!" Oriana spiegelte die gleichen Gefühle wie er. Er zog einen Dolch heraus und bot ihn ihr an. "Es ist noch nicht zu spät. Schneide dir damit einfach die Kehle durch und du wirst schmerzlos verbluten." Sie nahm das Messer an, ihre Finger umklammerten den Griff fest. Im nächsten Moment wurde er gegen die Wand gepresst und das Messer befand sich auf der rechten Seite seines Halses. "Wie wäre es, wenn ich es zuerst an dir ausprobiere, mein Verlobter?" "Du kannst es gerne versuchen. Aber wenn du versagst, wird dieses Messer erst das Blut deines Großvaters kosten und dann deins." Zorn stieg in ihren Augen auf, und im nächsten Moment floss Blut durch die rechte Seite seines Halses. Sie hatte tief genug geschnitten, um ein wichtiges Blutgefäß zu verletzen. "Du hättest mich nicht herausfordern sollen", höhnte sie und trat zurück, um zu warten, bis er zusammenbrach. Er schmunzelte nur und strich mit dem Finger über die tiefe Wunde an seinem Hals. "Sieht aus, als hättest du versagt." Sie sah zu, wie die Wunde an seinem Hals von selbst verheilte, und war bis auf die Knochen erschüttert. "Du... was bist du?" "Raten?" -----

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The book has an interesting take. I must say that it grabbed my attention in the very first chapter. The MC is certainly unique and not one that most people try to write these days. I like his dark outlook on life. Synopsis: Honestly, this could have been done better. While reading it, I wasn't sure what it was trying to convey. I felt a little confused and so I dived into the story without knowing what to expect. Writing Quality: This is very good. In terms of punctuations, vocabulary, etc, it is done very well. I saw a few instances where capitalizations were missing but those might have just slipped past the author. I'd recommend using Grammarly to catch those hidden errors. Story Development: Again, I like the MC. The story seems interesting and unique. It feels like a breath of fresh air when compared to most of the "copy and paste" stories I've seen. I can get behind the author with this one in regards to pacing and quality. World Background/Building: Not bad. Few more words could be used to describe the setting of the world but that's fine. This book is mixed with normal and abnormal things which I like. Overall: The story seems pretty solid so far. I like the direction and build-up around the character and his attitude. I am the type of person who loves character development though, so while I like the "Nigerian Prince" so far, a change in his attitude, later on, would do him justice. Good job and keep up the good work author!

Chuzi
ChuziAutorChuzi

"Every writer is already a liar" i read that somewhere, please five star the book, it doesn't cost a kobo. The five stars are a promise to do my best, so if you like the book. motivate me! [img=update]

Kamelzy1
Kamelzy1Lv2Kamelzy1

The story is unique, of course in a good way. The MC also has an interesting character, keep writing and keep it up author![img=recommend][img=recommend]

Urcrayontastic
UrcrayontasticLv10Urcrayontastic

I love what I've read so far! The MC is different than what you would expect, but that's a good thing! Keep writing and keep up the great work! A wonderful story so far.

CathAnnSweetflowr
CathAnnSweetflowrLv1CathAnnSweetflowr

Hi Author! I like this book so far. The first chapter took me by surprise with how negative the MC is, but I get where they're coming and why they think that way. It's refreshing to find a character like this compared to the "typical strong-willed, can't be dragged down and is always tough no matter what MC". I know this is a sci-fi story but the synopsis has me feeling rather lost, it's not bad but it could be better. I noticed that there are some instances where the reader is told what is going on rather than showing. It's just a personal preference but I'd rather find out what is going on as it is happening rather than being told what happened, unless it's background info meant to be sprinkled throughout the story. As for the writing quality, the style is good. Nothing too difficult to understand and easy to catch on to. However, please use the free version of Grammarly to double-check for some errors you may have missed. It's your first book, not bad at all. The worldbuilding is okay as described but like the synopsis, it could be better. Overall, the story is good so far. Nothing too flimsy that could crumble at any moment and it has a direction, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a character development arc because I adore those. Especially when the character would learn from it and it makes me want to cheer for them! Great job, Author. <3

TalentlessCarin_
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It is my first time to read a sci-fi genre novel in this app and i already liking it, good job dear author. Keep up the good work you're doing great!

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