Okay, first things first!
Great novel, I like the idea of this novel as I can also relate to it, where the story is currently going is something I can feel extremely familiar with.
Writing quality has some problems here and there, losing a few vowels and stuff, well some mixed words are there, but it is understandable, like from chapter 1:
"Wait go where to some place where Cultivation exist or what?"
Its a jumbled word or some sort, but it is tolerable, everything is great, just needs a few tinkering here and there, unlike mine which is full of shiits, 4 stars for this!
Stability of updates: well, a little slow so I gave it 3 stars, but after it improves, maybe, I`ll change my review again.
Story development, character design, world background, 5 stars, why? I like it, I find it extremely pleasing, seeing a work that is 60~80% going on a same path as mine, don't like it? fight me!
Well, sincerely, from a doting Senpai XD