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Training Pokemon

For a while I have read over all the cut and paste concepts on the Pokemon world trying to make the host strong as well as his Pokemon using the gamer system. I understand it's a dangerous world and you want to give the MC extra plot Armour. I thought about this and realized that the host would rarely fight in matters that needed strength except in situations that dealt with Legendaries. If that becomes par for course though in the story. What's the point of making this a long term novel that deals with the growth of a character. I would've set this as a short novel that deals with an overpowered MC that one shots all situations that need it. Also I wish to point out that Pokémon have sentience. The world also has abundant food with berries being around and the things that happen in Pokedex's in the games, I'm gonna try to stay partially away from as this is rated at a rating lower than 18+. (That's mostly because I find cursing unnecessarily to be just plain bad etiquette. I can understand if it happens when something bad occurs and you can't control your mouth. But flippant use of them just to annoy people is just that. Annoying...) The original story is also about friendship, journeying, and finding a purpose in the world they're in with their friends. Sabrina, Dawn, and May deal with contests. While Ash, and Iris love battling. Brock even finds a purpose on his journey as a breeder fully going into the field instead of just pursuing it as a side hobby like before when he had to take care of his brothers. As such I find it, while not useless for writing. A complete disappointment and withdrawal from the nature of what this world represents. What with hope and friendship being these main parts, and if you're fighting every creature you meet into submission. How is it possible for you to truly bond beyond servant and subject. Another thing is inside this story I will not limit the host to having 6 Pokemon on his being. No this would only apply to gyms or competitions as these kinds of things would require a more formal structure. I have decided on a new idea for this system that instead focuses on the Pokemon themselves. This includes knowledge, buffs, items and so on. The system will be less of a RPG stat layout directly as this still exists. But the stats come from training with the other stuff like others would train in a real world. The exception being Buffs. He can also use the system to build a utopia for his Pokemon. He can even slow down the time inside to gain larger training time later on for specific species which grow slower like Ninetails or various Ghost Pokemon. Enough of this Synopsis and rant though and on to the story. Ps. It's obvious, but I don't own this image. So I take no credit for it. And if someone eventually would like to make an image for this story I will thank you. Sincerely. PPS: Comments help me keep my want to write. When I notice there's not a lot of comments. I second guess my writing, like a lot. Probably for a good reason as I know I like to over analyze things, and I KNOW that's gonna influence my writing. I can see it deeply ingrained. So if you guys like my style please comment.

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Chapter 23-Selling Dirt

Our little gang had finally made it to our next destination. The famous Store Blocks and Berries. Walking in I thought of something and decided to pull out the nine bottles of Growing Earth. Immediately all the grass type Pokemon in the room stopped. Walking up to a counter I smiled warmly and asked "Are you interested in buying a new Product of mine." Taking a second to recover the lady at the counter made a face of excitement and yelled out "Dad get out here you got business."

The next second a man came out with his Oddish when he noticed his Pokemon going crazy. Looking at the cause he noticed a shine on the bottles indicating them as Pokemon enhancing items. What's more, the man had never saw these exact Items before. Walking over he introduced himself to me. Smiling I waved off his politeness with some of my own.

I hated the feeling of being polite like this. It hid the true me that was underneath. "Sir as I said before we call this new product, which we are so very proud of, Growing Earth." Seeing the man interested in the product I continued on "But the most amazing point is this. By letting a Pokemon hold onto one of these as an Item you can boost the power of Ground as well as Grass type moves. It is the first known enhancement to enhance two types." This statement I could guarantee with the system, my knowledge of this world, and the memories of living here.

The man before me appeared to be drooling at the thought of getting these new goods. He didn't know how rare they were, but he knew the value of other Items like them minus the ability to enhance two types of Pokemon, and he couldn't help but drool at the thought of getting one. The thought of theft never crossed the man's mind. In this Pokemon based world he could just beat thieves into submission if it was absolutely needed, but in this world crime was little as such most didn't need to even worry in the first place about theft happening. The greater laws of happiness prevented it. At least that was what I liked to call rules the world followed.

Still even with the world being good merchants were merchants; just the same in any world. "I'll sell these products with my wide connections," with this the man implied it might cost a bit to get them sold to the right people. Rebutting that I continued with my own counterattack "I'm sure that anyone would be thrilled to have a peace of a never before seen pie."

The man sighing just knowing this would be a tiresome battle, the boy after all wasn't gullible like others he had seen " I can give you 70% of all sales from you products." "Surely we both know that I need to take care of gathering costs. What about 95%. Since I am also the one providing the good to be sold." "That may be true sir, but we need to take up the space of our other stock with this which can cost us money. We even need time to sell these goods. It will even take a while for the goods to even at a chance catch on," the man continued with his defends. "It's true they take up space, but their extremely small so it would be of little consequence."

It had taken the two about another hour to finally come to an agreement and sign a document stating the price of where I would gain 85% of the profits. It wasn't as high as I hoped, but I suppose people are always greedy for more cash. This whole event turned out to be a torture fest for me though at the end of it. Being polite for so long had completely fried my brain. Taking one final look at the store, and the excited boss I walked away back to the Dojo leaving the case with 9 Growing Earths.

The reason the MC is getting such a high percentage is thanks to this being basically a luxury good. It would be an extremely sought after Item as well.

This has been revised.

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