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The Rise Of Calamity

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"Who touched you?" he asked, his eyes brooding down at her and when she didn't answer, his voice thundered in the room, "WHO?" The butler who stood near the wall spoke shakily, "Sir, it was Mr. Reverale," Damien's face turned sour, his jaw ticking in anger he turned his face to the side where the butler stood behind. "Bring the man here." "N-now?" stuttered the butler. It was the time of night. Damien who hadn't broken his eye contact with the girl in front of him, pushed his hand against the wall which now rested beside his beautiful girl's head. Turning his body, he first looked at his butler who had his head bowed. With great courage, the butler came to meet his Master's eyes, "Do you have any other better time? Or should it be after I wring your neck?" Damien asked calmly tilting his head. Not a second later, the butler ran out of the room to return back with Mr. Reverale after twenty minutes. "Damien, are we having a late tea party?" Mr. Reverale came to greet but the master of the house had other plans. Spotting the knife that was stuck to the apple on the table, he reached for it to pull it out. Just as Mr. Reverale went to exchange a handshake with him, Damien took hold of his hand to place it on the table. In one swift movement as if he were chopping onions, he chopped the four fingers of the man off his hand making him yelp and cry in pain. "No one touches what is mine. I am sure this will remind you the next time you even think about touching her," sighed Damien as if he were tired of telling people to keep their dirty hands off his belongings. Meet Damien Quinn, a pureblooded vampire who is a complete narcissist, brash with his words and stingy even though he is rich who haggled when he bought a slave from the black market. On the other hand, meet Penelope who believes she is a 'guest' for a few days at the Quinn as she is intent on escaping from the odd vampire who needs therapy. ~ Discord: https://discord.gg/K63uVqN

ash_knight17 · Fantasie
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761 Chs
Inhaltsverzeichnis
Volumen 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 :The Birth Of Calamity
Volumen 2 :The Rise of Lilith

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Overall a novel that you could binge. This review might state lots of complaints but ill remind you that if I took time to write such a long review, I loved it to the point that I am willing to spend enough time typing my measly gripes. Writing quality is kinda flawed mostly due to an abysmal amount of spelling errors. I can't even calculate the number of times 'barely' became 'barley'. But there have been lots of improvements as we come to the chapters released these days. I don't see half as many errors compared to the beginning. The narration style is odd, to be honest, Beginning was third person, Then it had shifted to first-person, and then finally evolved to something sort of like first-person crammed into third person(FL point of view). But I enjoyed this and am impressed with it. I would say take a shot, read a few chapters to find whether it fits your style. Also, Author-san if you are reading this, I would like to suggest you stop pasting the last few lines of the previous chapter into the next chapter. Updates as far as I'm concerned are really good and steady.14 chapters a week is good and although the length of chapters is on the shorter side, I guess it makes up with the number of chapters released. I won't say anything more about this mainly due to me just binging 200 chapters in one day. The plot is good objectively but it's not a 'nice' story. The intro will be quite dark and disgusting, Even me myself almost dropped this novel due to the intro but I gave it a chance and I would say it didn't disappoint me in the least. It's very fictional with very very low amounts of reality. Mostly felt to me like reading a Chinese XuanHuan novel. If you dare mix reality in this novel, you will find yourselves with humungous amounts of plotholes. Also, I could say that the plot had changed from being 'extremely dark' in the beginning' to something that could be 'enjoyed by anyone' when it nears the present releases. In the end, I could oversimplify it as a journey of a person from a psycho to a god(world-shattering kind..). Now coming to Characters... There had been without a doubt lots of memorable personalities but I would say character development has lots of nice, as well as bad moments. First would be our protagonist, Her character at the beginning which was completely intolerant towards humans had become something entirely different when it comes to chapters 200+. I won't speak much more on this to avoid spoiling but I loved the entire character development. Now talking about other characters, Some of the vital support characters got dumped midway in the story and there was no side story nor anything of that sorts to remind us those people even exists now. I hope they come up in the future as side stories... Now about the world background, the Magic background was modified mid-story. also, many other kinds of world information were modified mid-story. Nothing about countries or politics nor factions were given much importance, Not barely enough information to visualize the world. It's 200+ chapters...at least try to explain more about the countries and the world she lives in... Now, that's all folks, Don't drop this novel reading the first two dark chapters, it gets really better 100 chapters+. The Author has been showing lots of growth and I would say that I'm looking forward to how this entire stuff is going to turn out. Thanks for reading this long and boring review, It makes me happy if anyone has read this review to this point! Thank you!

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